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Hey, my first vore story, set in Halo! It's a bit short, and isn't as good as I would like, but eh, its my first foray into writing my own vore I'm sure I'll get better in time.
Regardless, if anyone wants more, I can write more, though keep in mind I'm still not an expert at this as stated above.
Regardless, hope you all enjoy!
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Posted by Dragonsurfer 5 years ago Report
This is really nicely done! I enjoy it alot.
A promising beginning into your writing I say~
Posted by Starduster 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Though its a bit short by my standards, usually I aim for at leasy 3000 words for my other stories (granted this is my first smut story, so I may be biased).
Posted by whitpey 5 years ago Report
Love the idea
Posted by Starduster 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by whitpey 5 years ago Report
I would love to see more like this from especually with this commander character as this was awesome.
Posted by Starduster 5 years ago Report
And what would you like to see specifically, then?
Posted by whitpey 5 years ago Report
I liked the casualness of it and the disposal