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This is a small story that was originally two separate drabbles for the same patron on my Patreon. Seeing as they were the same scene, I figured I'd put it into one story and post it here!

Evan checks himself into the hospital complaining of being "clogged", leading to a very shitty shift for an unlucky nurse.

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Cryos: All comments and criticism are welcome here. I want to improve my writing, and any input you may have would be a great help. Just dont be a dick about it. I guarantee I'm more experienced in that regard.

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TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 1 year ago Report

Was kinda expecting evan to release both of the girls along with however much shit hes got backed up, but ending is also great

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soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Oh my gosh, I absolutely adore this story! I just can't get enough of your casual dirty anal vore stuff, it's written so very well!

Particularly love the fact the nurse almost rescues the woman, and that little line towards the end about the woman being very much beyond reach, even if Mary might still have hope.

I love how open ended it is as well. Who's that first woman and how did she wind up in there? If he's hoping they'll just gurgle away maybe she's a recent catch, especially to still be so conscious, or maybe they're both in for the long haul and it's just his bloating that's going to gurgle down.

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Cryos

Posted by Cryos 1 year ago Report

HECK, I'm glad that you liked it so much! These lettle blurbs have honestly been so much fun to write, and im overjoyed an artist and writer that I still admire so much took time to tell me the ins and outs of what they loved about it!

I try to walk a fine line between casual vore and absolutely horrific stuff with these bits, and i guess its landing quite well! You'll also be thrilled to hear that im writing another blurb like this veeeeery soon with the same themes and main character.

Also, you should still totally add me on discord so i can spill more detsils in secret, nerd~ send me a pm or something~

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soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Haha you're too sweet :). But it's great to hear you're having so much fun with them; I definitely think it shows in the writing! I seriously loved this, the only thing I thought might have improved it was a little more dialogue from the woman (but hey, I'm awful at dialogue so I'm no position to comment!)

You walk the line well! And that's a great way to describe this particular setup I've never thought of before "casual, but horrific"

I'll definitely look forward to it! And ping you a pm, and get my ass on Discord a bit more often xD.

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Cryos

Posted by Cryos 1 year ago Report

Can do, haha. you've been a huge inspiration to be and chatting with you is always a pleasure <3

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Rambodash

Posted by Rambodash 1 year ago Report

Hey! Cryos’ patron here, usually anonymous but I had to log in when I saw your comment. Your work was a massive inspiration when coming up with premises for these bits with Evan. (Even way, waaaay back. The Clinic or Club Sextoys gave me new appreciation for casual filthiness and deliciously-paced vore) Thanks for spreading the love of all things fabulously filthy! I can’t wait to see how Cryos will present the next blurb, they’re absolutely killing it.

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soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Oh my, well thank you very much!

I'm glad to be an inspiration, if only because I love Evan and what these little stories are doing with him! Cryos really is doing a wonderful job.

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1heartstinkygirlz

Posted by 1heartstinkygirlz 1 year ago Report

Dang. Those two girls had quite the fate owo

Loved it! There just isn't enough filthy anal vore stories out there! Once again you had just what I was wishing for x3

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KindaGamingNgl

Posted by KindaGamingNgl 4 months ago Report

I personally really dislike scat/poop, and I find it really annoying that %99 of the stories that exist have scat in them.. but I must give credit where it's due and say that this is really well done~ I love the teasing that the femboy does and the torture stuff he does~ and the whole idea and scenario is very hot~

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