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John's psychotically jealous ex finds out where he and his new girlfriend lives. He's got to rush home to try and save the day.
The usual, long time site peruser, brand new writer.
Any constructive criticism welcome.
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Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
You're off to a hell of a strong start with these two stories, excellent work!
Posted by OrmusRidder 5 years ago Report
Thank you sir!
Posted by ninth 5 years ago Report
Nicely done, good writing
Posted by Lupe 5 years ago Report
Great story! I can’t wait to see more from you!
Posted by mallowsal 5 years ago Report
a gender reversed version of this would be cool
Posted by IareaGuys 4 years ago Report
Holy shit! This is by far the best Unbirth Tug of War i have ever read! I would liked it if he joined his Girlfriend, but apart from that its insane.
Posted by OrmusRidder 4 years ago Report
I thought about it, but That might come later.
Posted by firefox01 4 years ago Report
incredible work!!!!!