Great story, and I hope to see more of your writing. Only gripes were some sloppy grammar. Also you called it an orca but also a dolphin later in the story.
Huh, I didn't realize they were so closely related! It might still be confusing since the average person would assume you mean a different animal though. Like, if you google dolphin, you won't see any pictures of orcas. Either way, I still enjoyed the story a bunch.
Posted by heromc 5 years ago Report
Great story, and I hope to see more of your writing. Only gripes were some sloppy grammar. Also you called it an orca but also a dolphin later in the story.
Posted by tvulture 5 years ago Report
Sorry about grammar issue.
An Orca is part of the dolphin family, so you can call it an Orca or a dolphin.
Posted by heromc 5 years ago Report
Huh, I didn't realize they were so closely related! It might still be confusing since the average person would assume you mean a different animal though. Like, if you google dolphin, you won't see any pictures of orcas. Either way, I still enjoyed the story a bunch.