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Dr. Gordon Freeman's relationship with Alyx Vance becomes more intimate than either of them could ever imagine.
This story was originally commissioned as a shorter piece, but my love for Half-Life and Portal won out in the end and I wound up writing this 51-page monster.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/143b77fS54eV8TyHAPzP3KjaEPH5ZaZfo7TXOfskxO5U/
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Posted by Azoon 4 years ago Report
This is very detailed. I like it.
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I rather pride myself on really bringing out the details of the digestive process.
Posted by IJustLurkOnD 4 years ago Report
ALYX VANCE WHO WAS GORDON FREEMAN'S FRIEND WAS ONE DAY A WHITE FOREST, TYPING ON A COMPUTER.
SHE GOT AN EMAIL FROM HER FRIEND THAT SAID: THAT ALIENS AND MONSTERS WERE ATTACKING HER BOAT AND AXED HER FOR HELP. SO SHE WENT. ALYX VANCE GOT HER COMPUTER SHUT DOWN AND WENT ON THE PLATFORM TO GO UP TO THE ROOM OF THE BUILDING WHERE SHE LEFT HER HELICOPTER AND NORMAL PEOPLE CLOSE BECAUSE SHE WAS IN HER SKINNY JEANS. ALYX VANCE GOT ON HER HELICOPTER AND SAID: "its time for me to live up to my family name and face full tour c o n s e q u e n c e s."
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
This made me laugh so hard! Thrilled that at least one person knew exactly what reference I was making!
Posted by danztrash 3 years ago Report
I really loved reading this. It was a pleasure and I love the big detail you put into the descriptions and interactions of Alyx's esophagus, sphincter and stomach, as well as the test of the tour. Loved the way that masses of different food were also added to the whole mixture, making it all messy ;)
Easily one of my favourite shrink/vore stories.
Posted by ElPortero 3 years ago Report
I can't believe I missed this comment! Thank you for the kind words — and for enjoying all the details I put so much work into. It's folks like you who keep me motivated to write stories like this!
Posted by casuallurker 3 years ago Report
aye, Portero. this be one mean piece of work, sir. ;-)
Posted by ElPortero 3 years ago Report
Thank you! It was certainly one hell of a story to wrangle, but it seems the herculean effort was worth it in the end!
Posted by Zephyr42 3 years ago Report
This feels exactly like it'd be in the games. I love that sort of going above and beyond.
Posted by ElPortero 3 years ago Report
Thank you! I am a huge fan of both the Half-Life and Portal franchises, so I wanted to do them justice. Looks like I hit the mark!
Posted by Kelly 2 years ago Report
That title killed me one of my favorite youtube videos x3
Posted by ElPortero 2 years ago Report
I figured, hey, if I'm going to do a Half-Life fan fic, I've gotta pay homage to the greatest one, right? :D I love how much this story has connected with fellow fans of the games.