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Byleth's Big Debut Part 1 By Ghoststar77 -- Report

Byleth had just arrived to Smash Bros and is immediately challenged to face four of the strongest and fattest smashers in a four match tournament where whoever eats their opponents first is the winner. However, even with her skills and experience, Byleth decides that she may need a partner to have her back. Here partner of choices being certain young angel that nobody expected.

My part of a trade with  thicceater

It ended up being a lot longer than I expected. But, I'm happy with how it turned out. And I hope you guys enjoy it as well. ^^

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thicceater

Posted by thicceater 4 years ago Report

I looooove this bud! You did a fantastic job! Thank you so much! <3

Ghoststar77

Posted by Ghoststar77 4 years ago Report

Thank you! ^^

Looking forward to writing the next one. Just not right away ^^;

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 4 years ago Report

Well good to see something like this. I really like it and can't wait to see how big Byleth will by after eating every one of the Big Four.

Ghoststar77

Posted by Ghoststar77 4 years ago Report

Thank you ^^

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 4 years ago Report

Though if Byleth ate her as well as Morgan, shouldn't Byleth be fatter then Robin. She's described with less weight. Roughly 200-300 for Byleth to 300-400 for Robin. Is that a mistake?

Ghoststar77

Posted by Ghoststar77 4 years ago Report

Not necessarily. The transfer of fat isn't an exact science, especially in stories like these. There are a lot of factors to consider like metabolism as everyone gains weight at a different rate. Plus, since this is Byleth's first battle against the Big Four, I didn't want her to gain too much weight too quickly.

Also I did say that she GAINED roughly 200-300 pounds, not that it was her current weight. So, with the fat she gained added to her weight before she would already weight between 300-400 pounds by the end of the match. So she now weights roughly around the same as Robin did.

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 4 years ago Report

Guess I misread that little portion. Sorry about that. Usually I describe something like that as essentially they gain the same amount as the Prey's weight, just straight out for simplicity. Though who'll she fight (and who will Sothis nom) next time?

Ghoststar77

Posted by Ghoststar77 4 years ago Report

No problem. As for their next opponent, that would be Princess Peach.

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 4 years ago Report

Then Palutena and then Bayonetta right?

Ghoststar77

Posted by Ghoststar77 4 years ago Report

Pretty much.

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 4 years ago Report

Sothis seems oddly familiar with eating people. I assume she’s done so before. The Big Four will end up as the Big One. Just how big will Byleth be after eating them all?

Ghoststar77

Posted by Ghoststar77 4 years ago Report

She was most likely just bored being stuck in Byleth's head and decided to try vore for kicks.

That's all I can tell you guys for now. You'll have to wait for the other parts to find out anything else.

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 4 years ago Report

Alright fair enough. Can I ask when the next part will be up?

Ghoststar77

Posted by Ghoststar77 4 years ago Report

Don't know yet.

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 4 years ago Report

That's fair.

Dos

Posted by Dos 4 years ago Report

Aside from the fact that Laguz don't exist in 3 houses this was really good!

Ghoststar77

Posted by Ghoststar77 4 years ago Report

Yeah, I was rather confused about Fire Emblem's timelines between games in terms of where and when things took place. But, I'm glad you still enjoyed the story.

Mancrer74

Posted by Mancrer74 4 years ago Report

I really enjoy belly squashing stories and the fight between Byleth and Robin had a really good one.