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The attack on the Coronet goes a bit differently this time around...
This one was a doozy for me, I think it might be one of if not my longest. Being a huge Obi-Wan fan led me to fall in love with Satine's character, and a recent story and want to get into the Star Wars universe with my writing led me to this.
Inspired by ZeldaNoVorsu's "May"-ternity Strikes Back: https://aryion.com/g4/view/608569#2116457
They also came up with the dialogue for Sidious and Dooku, they are the master of Dark Side dialogue.
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Posted by bellylov3rs 4 years ago Report
Lovely lil story, only real critique would be the need of separating scenes with paragraphs for better flow like dookus talk with sideous should've been a separate paragraph.
I'm always surprised at the overall lack of vore for a franchise as huge as Star Wars there's so many fun scenarios awaiting to be explored.
I mean come on a female sith or darksider screams pred, enjoying slowly snuffing out their foe in their stomach while also getting fed as a result, reducing others to mere tools of pleasure and sustenance is a perfect darksider move .
Or Jedi healing wombs/stomachs or prison cells for dangerous enemies who may or may not become one with the force before they can be secured in a traditional prison cell.
Again fun read and enjoyed a pacifist like Satine having to snuff out a life in her mandalorian stomach.
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, formatting has never been my strong point, though I'm slowly learning. I think originally it was formatted correctly, but I ported it over to a different software so it took those spaces out.
I agree! Star Wars preds are too rare, especially out Mando girls.
Posted by bellylov3rs 4 years ago Report
Definitely! And since I just rewatched it the ladies of The Mandalorian would make good preds, from a rebel shocktrooper devouring empire officers, to the Armourer dealing with intruders in a way that leaves no evidence to the village mom relaxing after devouring a would be thief that snuck into the village at night.
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
I might need to do some with Sabine Wren and Bo-Katan Kryze after this
Posted by bellylov3rs 4 years ago Report
Both would be good too, the vore clan of Mandalore.
Posted by bellylov3rs 4 years ago Report
And don't worry about it everybody gets better at it in time my writings were atrocious when I first started I'm still so ashamed of how bad it was XD queen of run on sentences. And yeah uploading from other software can mess up formatting sometimes
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Yeah I think I managed to fix it this time. I had to completely copy it again but it should be good.
Posted by bellylov3rs 4 years ago Report
Ah okay , just double checked and yes it's fixed now :) though maybe it's just me but the thumbnail doesn't show Satine anymore.
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
I've had the issue with the thumbnail disappearing so I'll fix that when can get back on my desktop
Posted by Bionicman 4 years ago Report
Are you going to make a continuation of this?
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
I never thought about a continuation but I might later on
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
"There has been a disturbance in the Force. The death of Tal Merrick at the hands of the Duchess has altered the fate of the galaxy, although how... I do not know."
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Something has been set in motion.
And not just Satine's bowels
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
"General, can you hear me?"
"Yes, Count. Where is Kenobi? Is he safe, is he alright?"
"I'm afraid he's no longer a Jedi."
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Heh. Well I think we might see more of these two in the future. After all, Mandalore has many enemies.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
*Duel of the Fates plays ominously in the background.*
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Ah, such a shame Maul met with an... unorthodox fate...
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
*Imperial March takes over along with Vader breathing.*
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Yikes, cybernetics...
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
*Emperor's Theme along with Sidious cackling.*
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Now that, that is going to be an issue...
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
"The time has come. Execute Order 66."
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
*cut to Obi-Wan leading a group of Mandalorians to fight off the invading Stormtroopers with Satine waiting in a bunker*
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
*Heavy coughing and metallic footsteps.* "Hello there."
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
"I never thought I'd have to use this again..." *ignites lightsaber and readies his vambraces, jetpacking towards him*
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
*Is now wearing black armor with the Imperial insignia on his shoulders, ignites four red lightsabers, all taken from fallen Jedi after Order 66 and bled by Sidious. Starts spinning his blades.* "I've been looking forward to our meeting, Kenobi. Lord Sidious has made improvements to my cybernetics. Let's see how you fair against them."