Final, alternate, version here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/609959

So I started writing this story and realized that it'd be a lot shorter and less tedious if I re-wrote it so that it was much less overly-involved. I think the final version packed more sexiness into less space and with less effort, but the start of this is something that I hope some of y'all will like.

Comment and critique if you like, and leave any requests in my DMs.

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