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"To celebrate Independence Day, I present Zelda skipping her responsibilities to pig out on sausages and people." - ZeldaNoVorsu, July 4, 2016
Anyone who recognizes that ancient and pretty bland description has probably been following me since my beginnings here. This year, for the Fourth of July, I decided I wouldn't write a new story, but instead give two stories a second chance at life (sort of like what the US needs right now itself). The first, Independence from the Stars, I already posted earlier today and needed a second chance because of my failure to post it in a way that would get it attention (and its already doing better than its original posting, affirming my theory). The second, this story, is rather popular in its original version, which you can find here. However, the writing makes me cringe, so I decided to do a remaster. The story itself is the same, but the story is fleshed out with more detail and actually proofread (something I'm not sure that the original had). Think of it like taking Ocarina of Time with its mediocre (don't @ me polygon lovers) graphics and gameplay flaws and turning it into Ocarina of Time 3D, with much improved graphics and gameplay (like the iron boots being an item rather than equipment). The graphics are details while the gameplay are missing words and minor inconsistencies with later stories in this storylines. Either way, enjoy this fresh version of a ZeldaNoVorsu classic.
Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report
Oh, this is a remake of the original. I was going to comment that they probably would have been suspicious if she tried to pull the same ruse again, but then I read the description.
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
Indeed it is. If I wrote descriptions like I used to, then you wouldn't have known. But, like my story writing has improved, so has my description writing.
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Posted by The K 4 years ago Report
In addition to her cheeks bloating from the burp I enjoyed that the gas bubbles could be heard rising up her throat. That warns everyone the belch is coming!
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
Indeed. My thought is that a meal of that size would cause some large gas bubbles rise would be loud and deep enough to be heard as a warning.
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