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The aftermath of Melissa's binge eating. She is in for quite the shock.
I immediately felt inspired to write this story after the first because I wanted to explain a bit more but also because I love the concept. I hope you all reading this enjoy the story as much I did writing it.
Also I would much appreciate help with the tags for this one. Since I am not really sure what fits.
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Posted by Tahg 4 years ago Report
I'm not sure either. Sentinent should be Sentient (in both stories). It's a pretty redundant tag though. All prey is sentient, otherwise it would just be food. I think what you're going for is the prey is still sentient after being absorbed? I'm not exactly sure where all the girls are, but there's a number of common tags on the gallery. eg Sentient ___ (fat, ass, boobs, cock, etc) whatever applies.
Other tags that might be good (just browsing the gallery): Maid, Embarrassed Pred, Nude Woman, Cum
Posted by Filtia 4 years ago Report
Thank you for the help as well.
Posted by Tahg 4 years ago Report
I don't mind either way, but I just want to clarify that both the women who stopped by were Melissa's parents? It wasn't exactly clear from the context.
Posted by Filtia 4 years ago Report
Yes. Both of the women at the end were her parents. Well one of them is packing under the clothes.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 4 years ago Report
The sheer debauchery, love it. Love me some hyper cock, add some smother to boot and thats an instant fave.
Posted by Filtia 4 years ago Report
:)
Posted by thequietmanno1 4 years ago Report
i quite like this- how they're all fused together into one big body, with Melissa in the driver's seat, but the others being voluntarily plugged into her id, being literal devils on her shoulder, enticing her to give into her urges
i hope they remain together for a long time, because these girls seems to have struck up a nice balance with themselves inside melissa, and i love seeing shy wallflowers begins brough out of their shells by their more confident other halves
would be fun to see melissa going on a date as she is now, or trying to preform normal activities like talking a walk or going shopping with her passengers egging her on to do naughty stuff all the time
actually, the set-up reminds me a lot of the BE Story Club's T&A comic, especially how they all share the same sensations through the one body- i hope this series turns out as enjoyable as that one
Posted by thequietmanno1 4 years ago Report
as for tags i'd say: merging, Fusion, mass vore, hive mind, F/FFFF, Maid, Growth, Hyper, Lesbian and expansion
Posted by Filtia 4 years ago Report
Thank you for the compliments. I will have to check out that comic as well. And thank you again for the help with tags.