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Eighty-One's Contract Killings: Abby By YourFriendComputer -- Report

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Eighty-One is a long-time contract killer, the eighty-first of many volunteers for early iterations of cybernetic enhancements known as "augs" or augments. Join him today as he hunts a truly dangerous opponent: Abigail, herself a corporation assassin for multi-armed corporate giant Papitska.

This was an experiment with writing a more cyberpunk-esque setting, as well as a more drawn-out opening and a protracted fight scene, since I've been wanting to practice these things. It's also rather long; the length got out of hand pretty quick.

Enjoy!

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ViolVulpini

Posted by ViolVulpini 4 years ago Report

An amazingly powerful story with a really well defined setup and interesting world building!!!

THE FIGHT SCENE WAS REALLY INTENSE! You are incredibly talented at conveying emotion and rapid-fire action and should be really proud!

ALSO the couple is REALLY cute, Eimi and Micha is a good pairing, their banter as friends and lovers going through and at the end was really enjoyable!