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Shy college student, Erin, is always criticized and teased by her friends for not indulging in the latest food trend. Stuck on her own most of the time in quarantine, she decides to bite the bullet and try this new popular delicacy as an appetizer for dinner, not knowing whether she'll be able to go through with it in the end...
My first story commission! The buyer wished to remain anonymous, but wanted to see a story focusing on a shy, unsure predator's perspective. It was fun to write, and came out pretty quickly within the hour I put it together (not including editing and all that other cleanup jazz). I like that this can kind of fit into my "Low Prospects for Littles" canon pretty well.
For those that don't know, I made an interactive on writing.com about a world where people charged with even basic crimes or below a poverty line are shrunk and turned into consumable products (food, pets, decoration, etc.) If you're curious to check that out and are patient enough to deal with writing.com's bullshit, here's a link: https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2222158-Low-Prospects-for-Littles
Would love to see more additions to that world, both there and here. If you're interested in ordering a story commission from me, let's get in touch : )
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Posted by Krauser 4 years ago Report
Awesome! I didnt know about your lpfl canon before. The universe you made is totally up my alley in just about every way
Posted by Ty975 4 years ago Report
Yeah man! It's a fun little AU where we can get away with casual sadism for kinky size purposes. My other story, Pit Stop Snack, also takes place in this world.
Posted by Krauser 4 years ago Report
Yeah I enjoyed that one too. The casual nature of it all nails it for me. The terror and humiliation contrasted with it. looking forward to any future entries you make in this series
Posted by Krauser 4 years ago Report
On second thought I noticed that Reagan calls out for someone named Erin in Pit Stop Snack despite them never being mentioned earlier. Coincidence? I think not!
Posted by Ty975 4 years ago Report
;)
Posted by SDFhvsdfbwiez 4 years ago Report
I really like your writing style. Weird question but have you written any non-fetish stuff? Honestly I almost forgot this was a vore story halfway through just because of how natural and fun to read the dialogue is.
Posted by Ty975 4 years ago Report
Thanks m8! I’ve mostly written outside the fetish for most of my life until starting to get into it properly last fall after lurking here for a while. The experience has definitely come in handy, even though I feel these final drafts could still use some deeper scrutiny in the edits.
Posted by AnAccount 4 years ago Report
Devilishly hot, and the pace was perfect