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Erin's eager to test out her newest guilty pleasure, but doesn't feel the same spark that she enjoyed so much with her first experience. That is, until she discovers an old friend amongst her Poké Bowl order.
Another commission from the same guy that wanted to see muh girl Erin at it again at Krispy Kreme (not affiliated). I'm quite enjoying seeing her ambition as a pred zero in on people she has a connection with. Might just go ahead and make another installment where she pushes this thread even further.
As stated before, this takes place in the same universe as "Pit Stop Snack" and my ongoing interactive on writing.com, "Low Prospects for Littles" https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2222158-Low-Prospects-for-Littles
Moving forward, writing is gonna be a bit harder for me while running the Paramouth studio, but I'm still happy to hear commission requests and take on ideas that sound fun and inspire me. That said, feel free to message me if you have something in mind you think I could do justice :)
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Posted by Krauser 4 years ago Report
Awesome! Was holding out hope for franklin but I think I knew what was in store. Love this AU.
Posted by Chitown1911 4 years ago Report
Thoroughly enjoyed this one, especially the food play scene!
I usually prefer cruel/teasing preds, but I found the gentle pred to be very fitting in this case. Nice work! :)
Posted by Altimos 4 years ago Report
I really like this, it was a nice build up to something that was unavoidable.
The only thing I would have hoped for, was maybe describing some of the digested remains of the others she ate and himself seeing his future in them, or something like that.
The way you described the stomach contents makes it seem she didn't indulge in anything else but sushi.
But, the description of the rice and seafood was certainly on point.
All in all, this was a mighty fine read, thanks for writing it <3