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"Veronica has been dealing with a nasty cold for over a week now, still working even while her boyfriend Taylor begs her to take it easy. Finally she relents, on the condition he does an odd favor for her..."
Just so you know, I've decided to rebrand my Eka's and DA accounts under the Paramouth name since we've recently been getting writing commissions and likely need a place to put them. If you've enjoyed the older stories on here and have been wanting more, happy to say they'll be making somewhat of a comeback (in addition to our usual videos, of course)
Enjoy! Let me know what you think of these and my other stories in the comments, really helps me get a groove for what you all want out of my work ^^
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Posted by psaykotic 1 year ago Report
This was an great read, well done!
Posted by Krauser 1 year ago Report
Glad to see more writing from you.
Posted by Ty975 1 year ago Report
Should say the same to you, bud! Keep it up with “Shrunk and Soldl and “Tiny Purge” ; )
Posted by SOSMA 1 year ago Report
Man, this has tons of my favorite stuff and is definitely one of your best! Female pred/male prey, loving relationship, mouth/throat play... not to mention that I'm a huge fan of braces, I think they make mouths unique!
Personally I prefer nonfatal, but I'm not too picky so an up-to-interpretation ending is good enough for me! Assuming we're going by the (somewhat) common logic that tinies are relatively more dense and sturdy than their giant counterparts, and assuming his clothes will take a little while to dissolve I think that as long as Taylor stays against he walls of Veronica's stomach, he can last until morning with little more than some burns on his skin - which is painful but survivable.
One thing I really appreciate you mentioning AND solving is the lack of breathable air in the stomach, since excess air would usually be expelled by burping. I feel like this is rarely acknowledged in vore scenarios because people like to focus on digestion, but I think asphyxiation would be just as likely to kill you if not be the FIRST thing to kill you. Not to mention that Veronica's attempts to talk to Taylor were deafening earthquakes from this close up (a pet peeve of mine is mouthplay scenarios where the pred can talk just like normal). Including these things as very real threats makes the mouthplay/endosoma portions feel more realistic.
Speaking of realism, I absolutely love how descriptive you were of the environment surrounding Taylor while he was cleaning the slime in Veronica's throat. I'm sure some people found that too gross for comfort, but I really enjoyed it. Personally I think a giantess/vore scenario where the tiny gets covered in fluids or guck is not only realistic, but kind of romantic and more intimate than it would have been otherwise? Specifically in this scenario I feel like it's a "if you're not willing to be with your girlfriend when she's sick, it's not true love" situation as well - or perhaps more like "if you're not willing to be completely engulfed in your girlfriend's snot it's not true love" here. I feel like both partners will become much closer after the experience even if they'll both be in despair during it, and might even become more comfortable making internal exploration a regular thing (after getting over the trauma). I don't really know how to describe it but I hope the gist of what I'm trying to say is getting across.