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Zaizen Aoi gets in a little over her head when she meets someone that she can't beat for the first time. She's punished in the most appropriate manner for an arrogant cutie: with a full tour of an older woman's digestive system.
I wanted to release this for Vore Day, but on that morning, I woke up to learn that one of my favorite manga was maybe getting cancelled because the author groped an underage girl. Needless to say, this absolutely demolished my plans for the next couple days as I spent hours researching, debating, and generally wallowing in frustrated misery.
Well, on the bright side, I was originally planning a more limited short story for this, but since I missed the big deadline, I've decided to expand it into a three-parter. Part Two is almost entirely finished, actually, so it'll be up in a matter of days. If I'd wanted to be more professional, I'd probably have finished the whole series beforehand and uploaded it in evenly spaced parts, but it's been so obscenely long at this point that I just want to upload something, ANYthing.
Sorry about the relative shortness of this, but as mentioned, you won't have to wait hardly at all for another part of approximately equal length. I've also been getting some work done here and there on Kaguya 7 as well as both a Raildex and a Fairy Tail story, but I'm not entirely certain the latter two will make it out of the final draft phase.
Lots of fattyspeak and more general depravity in the next part, I swear.
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Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
Very nice. I don't have any interest in any of the assorted Yugioh series, but you wrote this in a way that makes it work even without any knowledge.
Looking forward to the remaining parts. :)
PS: My personal preference for your other stories (aside from continuing Kaguya) would be the Raildex story, but that's me. You should write whatever works best for you.
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
The Raildex one is actually totally unrelated to the old one I mentioned. It's sort of experimental and about the Sisters. I'm not sure I like how it's turning out honestly. Fret not though, because I love Misaki too much to never write about her.
Posted by C107galaxytachyon 3 years ago Report
What Manga?
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
ACT-AGE. Easily the most upset anything anime/manga/LN/VN related has ever made me
Posted by The K 3 years ago Report
Great story. I enjoyed the stench of the stomach, the burp and how Emma placed her hands on her lips after doing so.
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
Glad to please!
Posted by dekabreak 3 years ago Report
Huh, didn't know you made another story, and unlike Raildex and Fairy Tail, it's actually something i know about or didn't give up midway through after finding it getting bad like Fairy Tail...okay, i saw like the first season of Raildex where Touma(i think that was his name) beats that vector guy that killed a bunch of clones, but never went back to the franchise and just kinda forgot about it...oh well, i recall both franchises having good characters to become preds.
Yu-Gi-Oh Vrains however, i have seen all episodes and man, it's nice seeing these two being used, Vrains didn't do much with them, then again, i felt like every human character besides Yusaku felt underused and way too weak.
But hey, vore stories using the VR elements, pretty cool in my opinion.
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
Aoi's general uselessness is probably what made her feel like good prey material to me honestly. Every time she tried to help, she just ended up getting kidnapped or pseudo-killed and making things worse. At least here she's finally helping someone out a bit by churning into virtual pudge.
Posted by dekabreak 3 years ago Report
True, but that goes for almost everyone aside from Revolver and Soulburner, everyone else lost all the time and did nothing against AI's, and even then, a newly formed appliance AI talked about how easy it was to beat Soulburner.
I know main characters are supposed to be the strongest, but everyone felt really useless for the most part in Vrains and way weaker than they were supposed to be, it also went really far with the whole "AI's are better than humans" thing, normally you'd expect humans to get more wins through determination or imagination, but nope, Onizuka only wins when he has an AI inside of him, Soulburner needed to have his enemy break, and Yusaku was the only one that always won...well, Lightning had to cheat to win at least.
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
Yeah, don't get me wrong, you're completely right. There was just something special about her that put her in an even lower tier than the rest of the jobbers, perhaps how she was always so gung-ho about being on the side of justice despite her ineptitude. Also she's cute, and cute girls look best as bellyfat.
>Onizuka only wins when he has an AI inside of him
>BRAIN HACK OVERLIMIT: I CAN SEE A WORLD... A WORLD IN WHICH I WIN THE DUEL!!!!!
>sets one card face down and ends turn, immediately loses
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
I can only imagine that Aoi is going to start losing on purpose now, hoping to get eaten again.