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A comic collaboration with Zi-zo. This is her story, and her characters. I hope you folks gonna like our little story!
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Posted by FaceInCrowd42 4 years ago Report
So...I've completely lost track of this. >_< Like, at the start they were trying to undo someone's transformation into a Dark Elf, right? I can't figure at all what this has to do with that.
Posted by AngelicChaos 4 years ago Report
It's called, this is what happens when a project is started before the concept is actually finished. Writer doesn't know how they want it to end, or change their minds in the middle of the project and have to work around what has already been made. Hardly Freims fault if what he's asked to draw isnt the most... *Fleshed* out thought. Lol
Posted by bodybag 4 years ago Report
Yeah I’m gonna be honest , I haven’t read a word of dialogue
Posted by sizehunter 4 years ago Report
I'm thinking the original plan was to restore Maelea, but pheromones.
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
Uffff :'(
Posted by Ezio45 4 years ago Report
lol uwu
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
It was all a plot to get Eiris and Orelia inside Malaea and Myrrha. Sorry for it not being clear enough ><. We are practicing story tellers.
Posted by bodybag 4 years ago Report
Your art is superb , if you lag behind in one aspect always remember
“Show , do not tell”
Visual mediums don’t need much to get by and if you can’t tell a coherent story, at least make it pleasant to look at
Posted by zizo 4 years ago Report
This comic has been on-and-off for 3 years, but I'll summarize. The format of the narration is a report to the Archmage in charge of them on the events that transpired. The pages up to this point have been provided from Orelia's point of view, which is unreliable as she's one of the ones who set this up. This trio of pages represents a shift to Eiris as the narrator. Basically everything up until this point has been a lie. Page 19 was the plot twist moment, and I apologize it did not come across as clearly as it could, but there were subtle hints in other pages such as Orelia biting her lip when Malaea opens her mouth on page 3, signalling that she's into this, while Eiris remains afraid and unaware. Eiris tries to cast the spell to 'change Malaea back' from a dark elf on page 12, resulting in absolutely nothing happening. Whenever Orelia is in charge of the narration, there are a ton of floral descriptions of what's happening, and on Eiris pages there is nothing besides misery and no narration at all.
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
I just thought what if the regrow inside her and this is all some mage inquiry the human standing their massive bulging belly surrounded by Elvin mages looking down in some kind of courtroom as they talk to the people trapped in her belly
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
I'm not that big on same-size and big bulging bellies ^^"
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
that't fine, I knew it was unlikely but thought it was a cool mental image
Posted by Zepdek 4 years ago Report
Always looking forward to seeing this update!
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
Yay :3
Gotta finish it soon then :D
Posted by Fgz 4 years ago Report
I expected "plot" and stayed for the plot.
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
Thanks for staying for this long journey! We are near the finale.
Posted by lortko 4 years ago Report
I have a feeling she will regret going out to the other lady who would slurp her up without a second thought
Posted by Kligor 4 years ago Report
Just saw this today for the first time so I saw all the pages. The story is coherent lol dont worry! Im excited to see where this goes!
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
Thank you! Im on a bit of a relative hiatus but I will try to finish this soon! ><
Posted by Ezio45 4 years ago Report
she could of killed or friend in fact pretty much did. she just managed to save her self. damn girl
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
I'M currently on a break, but right after I start working again I'm on it!
Posted by Fedorasharkz 4 years ago Report
Could we expect more pages soon?
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
I'm currently on a break, but when I return, the final pages are coming.
Posted by kramooo 4 years ago Report
cant wait for more love this
Posted by Freimgul 4 years ago Report
Its almost finished!
Posted by kramooo 4 years ago Report
YAY