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"Wait, another one of these so soon, ZeldaNoVorsu? Don't you have other stories to be writing?" you ask.
"Audience member, if you're asking that, then you must not be paying attention. I always have other stories I should be writing. I just go with what I actual can..."
This also just happened to need to be done right after the other one, as I promised techtician it would happen whenever he finally continued the Chronicles of Mara. So now, it's here. And I can't help but notice that both of these stories have matched both the predators and consumption methods of the two Displeasure stories I've done so far. Coincidence? Maybe. In case it wasn't clear what's going to happen in this story though: Peach is going to AV
techtician in revenge for making her prey in his last story. But! That happens partly because of our special guest this time:
derpsquid42!
(The thumbnail as at least more closely related this time, though the source image itself is not.)
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Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report
That moment when my avatar has read more of TCoM than I have... maybe that binge should happen soon. I do like being an observing villain, fits my character. I can almost imagine saying "Exceute order 42". Thanks for the cameo!
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
Your avatar is an avid reader it seems. It must be what it gets up to when you're off working on the game. An observational role definitely suits you. I'll be sure to cameo you again if either Tech or I step out of line again.
Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report
I was considering making a comment in the line of "*materializes* Did someone say Peach vore?", but I decided to read the series first. That binge happens now!
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
Perhaps that's what Order 42 is, creating more Peach vore content. Or perhaps because its 42, it means creating a story with both Peach and BotW Zelda. Tech will be excited about the binge, once I reform him that is.
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
*reformation tank noises*
Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report
Done. Good stories, maybe around your quality of stories. This competition seems a bit unfair though, you, as a god, have infinite regenerations, but poor tech loses part of a arm or his body every time he's eaten. By the time he catches up to you, there's not going to be much tech left to be eaten. By the way, the counter has been updated, the current progress can be seen here: https://mega.nz/file/6H5jHTwb#o2-T8oyQWZSKkTtjpxyBW4BJe6onR-jueQtvn63Dkzs
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
See! Though the arm is pretty sick.
And really? That level of quality? Huh.
Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report
I think they're pretty good, there were a couple minor random spaces, like t his, and I didn't get all the references, since I don't watch that much anime. But other than that, solid series. Quick question, you mentioned someone named Ace a few times, who/what are they?
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Yeah formatting is dumb. Dunno why it does that.
Umm Ace is a Lycan, basically a space wolf man, who will be making a formal appearance in an upcoming story in the current arc.
Tech is me, prey and observer (or pred over on Twitter rarely), Ace is my pred side incarnate.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
Well, if you're looking for Ace, look no further than the Vore Day story where he got shoved up Zelda's butt.
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
You.
Hush.
You've done enough damage to both sides of me the past few weeks.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
Oh, just wait~
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
You're a speed reading demon. Could you tell which parts I wrote in the ones we collabed on? Oh please, right now he goes in the tank, but soon he can just rely on me to do it with no more loss of body parts. Besides, if it's unfair for anyone, it's me. I have 20 points to his 6, and I hamstringed myself by writing myself as prey long before we started this little competition.
Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report
It helps having two eyes that focus on different things... kidding, I've always been a quick reader. And if I remember correctly, he's saving that arm reform until after he deals with Mara.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
I have a complaint to file with your counting. The Ko-fi series should only count for 2, not four. The two versions with each lady are the same story, just one has a disposal scene tacked on.
His stories also aren't as long as some of my... more involved ones, so that probably helped. Yes, he is saving that arm for now, but eventually I will reform it.
Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report
Fair enough. The disposal versions are the canon versions, then. And his stories are shorter, but he does have a little bit more for the more plot oriented ones.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
I mean, both versions are canon. The dirty versions are simply the full versions. Plot driven stories are usually longer no matter who writes them. Those are usually my longer stories because I love writing the story and world building. That's why that one story featuring mainly OCs (until Peach and Zelda came in at the end) was 30 pages long.
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
*reformation tank bubbling*
Translation: That last pun hurt worse than Bowser's punch to my ribs.
Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report
*rimshots with all 10 tentacles*
Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Archimedes play a clap sound effect. My arm hasn't been rebuilt yet.