Anna frantically scrambles to hide the night's events from yet another surprise visitor. Will she succeed?

Hey, those tags contain some pretty major spoilers by the way!

Okay, first things first, I have another Idea List post up in my blog. Throw me a comment on there (or a PM if you prefer) saying which one you'd most like to see written out, or even just a personal variant/suggestion you think might strike my fancy.

Now, on to the relevant stuff. Damn, I really wanted this one out a few days earlier, but there were a few sticking points in here that caused some problems. More down below.

Spoilers below:

Aha! I have tricked you all. I lured you in with lewd college slice of life vore, and now suddenly it's lewd college slice of life vore romance! Completely different! Okay, maybe it wasn't that much of a surprise. I do feel like chapter 4 gave away the game a bit.

Either way, we're finally here. A little over 5k words of more of the good stuff (at least in my bizarre mind). And hey, I said we were getting that gulp. There's just... some other stuff that happens too. A lot of other stuff. Maybe too much stuff. This chapter basically marks the end of the introduction to the series. Seriously, this is chapter 6 of what's currently outlined as something like 30. Honestly, you could probably wrap up the story here and call it a vaguely passable novella. Not like I've left any major plot threads dangling...

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Anyways, there were a few really tough bits to write/rewrite here, and I'm still not entirely satisfied with the results. Lilly kind if winds up feeling like a bit of an afterthought, with Anna/Dawn really taking center stage. Dawn's confession, Anna's uncertainty/personal revelation, and the few bits of post-vore dialogue all still feel a bit sketchy to me, but I really don't want to get caught up on this for too long because...

I'm going to be doing some revisions on chapters 1-6. I'll be posting a blog about it at some point soon, but the short version is I'm merging chapters 1 and 2 (I'll leave them separate for now, just for clarity purposes, writing a whole new chapter 2.5 (basically the new chapter 2, which you'll kind of need to read that for chapter 7, but it really doesn't change anything in 3-6), and doing some minor continuity/revision work on the rest, just to keep things consistent and maybe brush up on some characterization/prose.

So yeah, look forward to that. Aside from the chapter 2.5 stuff this really shouldn't take that long to get done, and I'm getting seriously close on that old Idea List story. I swear it's coming soon! Currently back down to 12k words, but I feel like it might end up closer to 14k again when all is said and done.

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