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The Tail-Chaser as traveled to a land unfamiliar to Wesley, home to people the likes of which he has never seen before. There are some familiar faces living in this region, none of whom he is happier to see than his wife.

Reunited with Sonja, he and she embrace in love, and see just how much each other has changed over the years since their parting.

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Special shout out to my friend Nalzindar for the character of Atalanta. He came up with the character and the role she would partake within the story.

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Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report

It is good to see Wesley and Sonja meet again at last, even though they seems to part again on a less cheerful mood, I hope they will resolve their disagreement fast. Hehe, if you like footjob, then getting it from a sexy giantess must be your ultimate dream! It was fun to meet Atalanta and see how she cope around dragons and giants, nice face sitting and almost accidentally vore there^^
This looks to be one of your longer chapters and there is plenty to imagine about what can happens next, like what kind of diabolical schemes the kitsune will come up with next.

I am already looking forward to the next chapter:3

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

Even though I do like footjobs, the character Wesley's obsession with feet comes from the desires of the real-life person the character is based on.

I thought you might enjoy the accidental vore, even though it may not have gone as far as some would hope. And yes, this chapter was 19 pages on word, I had a bunch of big characters being brought back/introduced all at once this chapter.

I hope you'll continue to enjoy the series ^^

Donotlike13

Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report

So Sonja's 46 meters tall, was she always that big from the start of the series? If not then how much has she grown?
And how did Naomi survive to meet her queen again?

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

Sonja was initially 45 meters, or 150 feet tall at the start of the series, and over the 8 years since the story started, she's grown around 1.5 meters, or roughly 5 feet.

As for Naomi, she was never captured or far out of contact from the Resistance. At the end of my story, On the Run, the giantess was found by Princess Nadia, and taken into the Ure so she could recover from her injuries. Over time, the remnants of the Resistance, including Queen Sonja, gathered and regrouped in the safety of the region.

Donotlike13

Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report

So is that the normal growth rate? Seems kind of slow unless its faster when their young.

Maybe its time for some character bios to get all these details in one place?

Yeah I read the story just wondered how she got from that situation to this one.

Since Atalanta is human size how could she make enough food in time for a giantess? For that matter how many people would a giant have to eat per day to stay healthy? And how many more until they couldn't eat, or swallow, another bite if their lives depended on it?

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

Exactly. Giants grow very fast when they're young, but their growth rate slows as they get older. The dropoff is quick at first, then more gradual. Though it never becomes so low that they stop growing entirely.

A giant eats less than one would expect. Sonja could be healthy eating three humans a day - one for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Of course, healthy and filled are not necessarily the same thing, and giants have the capacity to gorge proportional to human capabilities. Sonja could eat 20 humans before she started to become uncomfortable, and twice that before her stomach couldn't expand any further.

Donotlike13

Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report

Good to know
You know one thing that not many writers think of is how many can a giant (big enough to swallow them whole without them being crushed in the throat, which I don't know the minimal size of) eat before there killed by being crushed from lack of space in the stomach. Say so many people are in there its up to the spinchter, do the ones on top kill those at the bottom? Is there enough space for air to keep them alive for long? Does the motions of the stomach squeeze them all like a grape?

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

Suffocation would be a very likely fate, both from a lack of air and compression of their chests. The crushing from other people would be equivalent to if somebody piled a whole bunch of people on top of each other in real life. Legit pile, not like a human pyramid where the weight is distributed and balanced. If the stomach is so greatly expanded, it wouldn't be squeezing the people together, as its muscles would be doing everything they could just to muster the pressure. Humanoid bodies would have to be thoroughly afflicted by stomach acid before their bones would be fragile enough to be broken by muscles. If the pressure was so severe, the giant in question may either throw up, or grit their teeth and bear it until some of their prey slipped into their intestines.

Donotlike13

Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report

Would you say the giants stomach is the same size and shape as a humans, maybe it takes up far more of the chest cavity (less intestines)?

And how long does it take for a single person to go from a screaming, wriggling body to a liquidy mush?

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

A giant's anatomy is actually the same as a human's just proportionally larger.

How long it takes for a giant to digest a single human - or even multiple - changes depending on their size, considering the larger they get, the stronger their stomach acids also become. A small giant, >50 feet in height, would have acid as potent as sulfuric acid, meaning it would take about 2 days to digest a human. While a larger giant <250 feet, could fully digest a human in about an hour. Sonja is adult, but on the 'shorter' end, and a human eaten by her dies of digestion in about an hour, and their remains pass into the intestines in five hours.

Donotlike13

Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report

Where did you find out it takes 2 days for sulfuric acid to digest someone?

For that matter what about giants (not just yours but in general) having enough air in their stomachs to prevent suffocation? Say just one humans in a 300 foot giant does enough air come into it by nature or does the giant have to literally swallow air to keep up the pleasant struggling? Or is there biology different enough to allow it?

Can giants digest things like iron or even stronger materials?

And I guess the Queen only needs seconds to turn a human into a puddle of goo.

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

A few sources have put that as a constant time for the acid to dissolve a body.

Giants swallow air when they swallow prey whole, and not all of it comes back out when they burp. So a human could avoid asphyxiation until it becomes the least of their worries. I don't know how other giant vore artists justify their prey's prolonged survival in a stomach. I assume it comes down to how far people like to see the process go, be it if they want the prey to pass on before digestion begins in earnest, or if they want to see the prey screaming in agony as their flesh melts off their bones.

These giants cannot digest metal, so it's expelled from their bodies almost completely in tact.

Also, accurate.