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A smol story I wrote that came from one of the many many ideas that I had, please be gentle as this is my first story, I actually like and I'm not the greatest writer.
This is a story of a female pred who goes on a nice casual tinder date and is recounting the lovely meal she had and how she showed them off
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Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report
It's short, it's basic and it doesn't do anything we haven't seen in vore lit before. But it's also right to the point and gets to the meat real quick. For some reason I like it.
One critique is it could use paragraphs to break it up. It's all one big block of text.
Posted by TastyAce 3 years ago Report
I like this!