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Whatever happened to Mikoto after she ate Misaki and Junko? Saten has a video she'd like to show you...
So... I never really intended to start a sort of miniseries of Raildex vore fanfics, but somehow I keep getting ideas that follow one after another. In this case my original idea had been to write a story focusing on the events in Saten's video: Mikoto being found catatonic and placed in a hospital, the girls taking turns watching her, Saten choosing play a prank by swallowing Mikoto and then falling asleep and accidentally digesting her, and Saten gaining all the powers and calculation ability from Mikoto, Misaki, and Junko.
I actually had my plans for that story pretty well fleshed out, but as I was working it out in my head my mind ended up going past it to a sequel to that story, and by the time I got to a place where I could start writing, that second story was the only thing I could feel inspired about, and I couldn't make myself interested in writing the essential prequel to it.
So, in order to avoid having odd plot holes where there should have been plot yet there wasn't, I expanded the video segment in this story and included some mental exposition to basically cover the highlights of the previous story that I ended up not writing.
Oof.
And THEN this story decided to have a mind of its own, and switched its ending out on me when I wasn't looking! I'd originally planned to have Saten eat Eri in revenge for trying to digest her, but by the time I got to that point it just no longer made sense to do that. Saten had had too much fun being digested to feel vengeful about it. Also, despite the increased sociopathy that seems to be required for characters in vore fanfics (after all, canonically these girls would be horrified at the idea of murdering each other, no matter how it occurred), I just could not see Saten as an unscrupulous predator who'd digest her friends without a care.
Man, this description's gotten long. Um... please read, enjoy, and tell me what you think! :)
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Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
For those who don't remember the other characters in this story; Akemi, Muu-chan, and Mako-chin are three of Saten's friends from her school. They were the ones who tried the Level Upper along with Saten, and were playing around with their new powers when they suddenly started collapsing, sending Saten into despair when she realized that it was her fault, and that it was going to happen to her too.
Eri is Haruue Eri, an anime-only character who was important to the plot in the second half of the first season of the Railgun anime.
Posted by rayquaza100 3 years ago Report
Nice! I hope that we will see more of lv 5 Saten in the future.
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
The possibility certainly exists. If this were "ordinary" fanfiction rather than fetish fanfiction, I would never want to introduce a character like her, because she is ridiculously overpowered, combining the abilities of two level fives and an extremely high-end level 4 (which she can USE at level 5 due to her improved calculation ability). Of course, being overpowered is a very relative thing in the Raildex universe: Accelerator, for instance, could still kick her butt, and so could a number of people/beings from the magic side.
Fortunately, this IS fetish fanfiction, so that sort of thing doesn't matter. The purpose of these stories is to watch girls enjoy eating each other/being eaten by each other, so how powerful Saten is is irrelevent, aside from the added possibilities that such powers being into the story.
All that said, Saten's become addicted to the sensation of being prey and getting digested, and she's probably going to start treating it like a dangerous thrill ride: she loves the rush of pushing right up against the edge of actually dying. It's not hard to imagine some point in the future where she misjudges the timing, and really does just end up as fat on some other girl's breasts.
Posted by Observer702 3 years ago Report
With the course she is going, she might not mind that type of outcome
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
Oh definitely. That's part of what makes her enjoy it so much. As far as she's concerned she wins either way. Either she gets to experience digestion right up to the point of no return, then heals herself and can come back and experience it again; or she gets fully digested and she experiences the joy of utter submission with every bit of her being used to its fullest to make her devourer sexier.
...Well, ok, she doesn't technically experience the latter because she'll be dead (no sentient fat or whatever in my stories), but the thought of it happening is enough turn her on more than anything she's ever imagined.