Richard Stevens, a normal, but lonely biology student gets sent to another world, where vore is the norm, and sex is common. How will he adjust to the vastly different world?

I am an amateur writer, and this is my first story here. Please enjoy and give me any constructive criticism or ideas you may have.
Edit: I have began doing a mini-rewrite to the story mainly due to writing myself into a corner as well as to better define the characters' personalities. I hoped to do it earlier this week, but I have faced multiple distractions (Cyberpunk and Yakuza 0). I'm hoping to have the rewrite of the next chapter done by the weekend.

Changelog V2: I didn't change all that much other than fix most of the typos. I also added a few more scenes, including fleshing out the dog-girl janitor that will become a more important character later on.

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