Richard was invited to Alonia's house to stay with her family until he is able to be sent back. Will her family be as weird as she and the rest of the world is? Will they even accept him? Will he keep his planet's morals?

A/N: Here's the new version of my first round of rewrites/edits. The new version of Ch. 3 will come out by the weekend, hopefully. Thank you for your continued support.

Changelog (V2): The first change I made was altered Alonia's children's apparent ages. Before, I though of their aging rate was about for every Tiamatian year, they grow by about 3 years. I decided to turn that up to about 4, so they look a bit older than what I had originally planned. Next, since I have a better idea about what the characters' personalities would be like, I decided to add more character moments to fit those personalities, such as Malia being more of a chuunibyou. I also added a few more scenes to help build Malia and Richard's relationship as they are the two main characters of the story. Finally, I tried to do a better job explaining more about how life on Tiamat works, as I felt that some of the explanations were a bit awkward. Also, I tried to fix most of the typos/grammatical errors in the last version.

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