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The story of the fist male predator. Hard to say where I'll take this story since it's my first one but more chapters to come in the near future. Not too much in in the way of vore in this chapter but definitely in the next coming out either today or tomorrow.
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Posted by lupinus911 4 years ago Report
Interesting story! Looking forward to more chapters! I love the way you set up the world, lets us anticipate whats going to happen! My favorite trope in stories is when the protagonist starts out as an underdog.
I saw that you already established what the pred gains by digesting/absorbing prey, but is there any chance you can add for the protag at least, the ability to gain intelligence/memories/skills from his prey? I love that in this world the preds advantage is their higher IQ, so it would be amazing if the protag can become the same by taking it from his own prey.
Posted by Green6rundy 4 years ago Report
That is something I was planning on adding. Preds do and will gain some intelligence (maybe skills) from preys. That is how they become more successful that regular people.