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Jiva the turtleman has to go collect reports from his various co workers every Wednesday, a fact that this particular coworker seems to constantly forget about for some reason.
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I actually don't like the way this one came out, haha. The idea was there, the concepts were there, but it just didn't pan out very well and everything feels kinda half-baked.
I mean the story doesn't feel /bad/, just not great.
Oh well. Hopefully it's engaging enough nonetheless! We'll see what my brain does tomorrow!
I think this is my first deer, and I am definitely liking the idea of a voracious turtle, haha. Both on compressing things down and on spitting out the now-empty shell.
¡Orctober!
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Posted by starringer 4 years ago Report
That was...interesting!
Posted by Garz 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I guess I'm too harsh of a self-critic, haha.