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I hope you all enjoyed my first vore story! Already uploaded on DA, Ao3, and fanfiction.net, but this seemed like a proper place for it as well.
I fully admit I don’t know very much about the geography of Los Angeles, which any LA resident reading this will probably notice. Sorry - hope it doesn't detract too much from your enjoyment!
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Posted by Vstar66 4 years ago Report
Man im really loving your stories
Posted by PerilStories2020 4 years ago Report
Thanks, I aim to please ;)
Posted by Nugget1138 4 years ago Report
Saw your work before on Ao3 good to see you here!
Posted by PerilStories2020 4 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad to be here - and thanks for the watch and the faves, really means a lot!
Posted by SleepyIsland48 4 years ago Report
You earned yourself a follower! I loved noticing some Easter eggs throughout this story and how it fits with the continuity of the films. There’s a great mix of dread and sexiness, and the way you describe the prey’s body in this (and the Lex story) is excellent. I can’t wait to see what you do next!
Posted by PerilStories2020 4 years ago Report
Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! I'm a big Godzilla fan so I definitely tried to make it work within the context of the Monsterverse and work in a few references while I was at it.
Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
Great story, it is rare to see such a good Godzilla story here. I got a weakness for monster vore so I may be a bit biased, but despite Madison not being my preferred age group, it was a well written and engaging story.
The buildup towards the climax was smooth and had a natural flow, and when it came to the vore scene, it was descriptive, sexy and long enough to be a thrill. What surprised me positively was that your Godzilla had enough intelligence to allow his point of view to be seen as well, this, and that he showed it to Madison towards the end, gave the story another level. It isn't that often we get both the pred and prey's point of view. The details were great and I especially enjoyed the burping up clothes part at the end.
I hope Godzilla will come back an star in another story in the future.
(Though it wasn't mentioned int he text, but if Madison's personal sacrifice did make Godzilla go away as he had done after receiving sacrifices in previous times, she did save the day even though she never knew it.) Just a thought.
Posted by PerilStories2020 4 years ago Report
Thank you so much for your kind and detailed comment!
Yeah, I definitely noticed a lack of good Godzilla vore in the world -- so utterly baffling to me, I just had to do something about it. Very happy you thought it was so well-written!
I think Godzilla may star in a future story or two; perhaps we'll get to see one of the sacrificial ceremonies the ancient peoples held to appease him...
Posted by johaku99 2 years ago Report
Id love to see more of the monsterverse get they vore on
Posted by TheHumanPred 4 years ago Report
Amazing work man !!!
Posted by PerilStories2020 3 years ago Report
Sorry for the belated reply but I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
Posted by ElenaPrey 3 years ago Report
Incredible....lovely<3
Posted by PerilStories2020 3 years ago Report
Thank you so much! Any part in particular you really liked?
Posted by ElenaPrey 3 years ago Report
Well,maybe the suspance in the part where the monster was aboit to eat her...gave me chills!