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Tags: Absorption Accidental digestion Accidental vore Bofuri breast growth burping up clothes Digestion Digestion Noises F/F Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Honjou Kaede Itai no wa Iya nano de Bougyoryoku ni Kyokufu Lesbian sex Maple Oral Sex Oral Vore Sally Same Size semi-willing pred Shiramine Risa Soft Vore Trait Absorption Willing Willing prey Yuri
Risa (Sally) invites Kaede (Maple) over for a slumber party, but both of them find that the feelings they've been keeping secret are harder to hide when they're alone together...
All right, I have to admit, this story got away from me. Initially it was just supposed to be "Risa invites Kaede over for a sleepover, the two of them have sex, and Risa eats Kaede." Technically that all still happens, but the details turned out very differently from what I initially conceived.
Now, I'm certain some of you prefer Maple as a pred, but when it comes to the relationship between Maple and Sally, I can only see Maple as the bottom.
Anyway, I hope you all still enjoy this story. :)
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Posted by MugenNoSaga 3 years ago Report
I do agree, Sally feels like the top person, between the two. Because also without her, we wouldnt have Maple to play the game at all.
Posted by Whereaminow27 3 years ago Report
Awesome Story. Seems sally might want more now.
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
Seems likely, now that she's discovered how good it feels.
Posted by Whereaminow27 3 years ago Report
I have a feeling Kaede/maple's mother is going to be shown where her daughter went, when she tries to find out what happened to her.
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
That's certainly possible, although it's worth noting that the change to Risa's appearance after eating Kaede will help her out there. My thought about how it works is that if people expect to see Risa/Sally (ie, if she's wearing her own clothes, in a place where people would expect her to be, acting/talking like herself, all that) then people will see her as herself, although they'll notice that she looks a bit different and wonder what happened to her hair.
On the other hand, if people expect to see Kaede/Maple (if she's wearing Kaede's clothes, in a place where Kaede would be, acting/talking like Kaede (which she'll mysteriously find easier to do now), etc.) then people will see her as Kaede, although again they'll notice that she looks a bit different and will wonder what happened to her hair.
Thus, Risa could actually put on Kaede's discarded clothes, walk into Kaede's home, and be recognized as Kaede by "her" family. Although she'd have to come up with an explanation about what happened to her hair.
There are lots of fun possibilities I can imagine. That said, I do feel the need to reiterate that I never make any promises about future content. I may write more stories following up on this, or I may not. I don't promise more, because I don't want people expecting something specific and then finding myself lacking the inspiration to provide it.
Posted by Whereaminow27 3 years ago Report
Well, here is hoping that you continue this Story !
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
Lazy glance wise. My bet is if it got to the point of "body/trait" absorption. What's stopping from Risa starting to think 'like' Maple, pretend wise to remembering/acting like her. A sudden "disappearance" or the moderators going in panic mode over an "account merge" error. Leading to a player, with BOTH Max'd Speed and Defense...
Assuming, in another lens? It's alternately "Kaede" logs in alongside Risa, every time she logs in... And it turns out they share the same senses, "imaginary friend" Wise. And from there, a sort of 'inherited' predatory instinct on 'almost' wanting to eat more players "in game", leading to a worse/horrific PK Incident, that may or may not lead to "in-game absorption" that would be patched out. Possibly?
Posted by Bright 3 years ago Report
A short but enjoyable story.
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Posted by luckyp3616 3 years ago Report
Would have loved it even more if she consumed Kaede's mind and soul as well so she could truely be a combination of the two.
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
Well, should I ever finish a followup to this story, we'll see if something like that might have happened. :)
Posted by Valorie 2 years ago Report
Cute story, thanks :)