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An Unsightly Journey up the Wrong End Part 1 By Jawasattack -- Report

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My first time sharing one of my stories. This one is a 4 part story that I will continue to release if people like the intro.
Warning! The anal vore here is messy! Future versions will have a clean and oral vore pathway alternative.

Hope it is enjoyable, feedback welcome :)

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TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 4 years ago Report

I do hope Arya calms down and they can make up. If not, at least Arya has a new way to pleasure herself

Jawasattack

Posted by Jawasattack 4 years ago Report

She has a temper don't she? Best check out part 2 to find out ;)

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 4 years ago Report

Hmm... not bad, I like what has transpired so far.
This being your first upload, it's difficult to see the direction a writer would normally go, like fatal and whatnot.
I wouldn't mind seeing where you go with this as of right now <3

Jawasattack

Posted by Jawasattack 4 years ago Report

Thanks! Stay tuned then, as the direction might take a darker turn ahead <3

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 4 years ago Report

This... pleases me, dark is such a beautiful thing <3 <3 <3

KimMadcox

Posted by KimMadcox 4 years ago Report

Damn, that is some great writing. Awesome first entry to your gallery^^

Jawasattack

Posted by Jawasattack 4 years ago Report

Thank you so much! Was nervous to share but vore folks seem to be enjoying it. Glad you liked it too :)

soline

Posted by soline 4 years ago Report

Wow, amazing story! I love the dedication to realism, both with the filthiness and the general physicality of it. Arya taking her sweet time and taking ages to slowly drive him deeper, and still needing to actually eat with a guy up her ass.

Welcome to the portal, and thanks for such a great story, I can't wait to read the rest of the parts!

Jawasattack

Posted by Jawasattack 4 years ago Report

Soline, thank you so much for your feedback! I am a long time lurker of your work <3 Hope you enjoy the other parts and more to come!

soline

Posted by soline 4 years ago Report

Aww, well you're very welcome! I really hope we get to see more from you in the future!