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Arya has to finally let out her captive, only to find that he isn't in the best of shape...
Hope you all enjoy part 2. I already had this one written up so it will be a few weeks before the next chapter is out. Would love to hear peoples desires for how it will play out with the new character, Laylah that is involved.
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Posted by KimMadcox 3 years ago Report
Very hot second part. I love it^^
Posted by Raiden556 3 years ago Report
First off thanks for choosing the image you did as for whatever reason it grabbed my attention and I'm glad it did cause this was a brilliant story to read and I'm looking forward to the next part
Posted by Jawasattack 3 years ago Report
Glad to have clickbaited you ;)
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
I hope Laylah has a change of heart, not a lot brutal graphic non fatal where the prey going to need to be nursemaided by the pred to recover.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
So much for making up, Arya was pretty brutal to her toy. If she was worried about attempted murder, now she has to worry about actual murder. Not to mention that Layla knows where Dev is so im hoping she doesnt end up going the same way.
Posted by Jawasattack 3 years ago Report
heheh, yeaah sorry if you had your hopes up. Arya has one thing going for her though: she can't be trialed for murder without witnesses or evidence...
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
That doesnt bode well for Layla
Posted by soline 3 years ago Report
Annnd part two is absolutely fantastic, for all the same reasons as the first and more; I'm delighted you've decided to share with the portal! I really, really love the emphasis on how her poor boyfriend is...y'know, not digested because bowels don't do that, and just thoroughly merged in with several days worth of shit like a forgotten string of beads or something.
As for what comes next? Hrrm, well Laylah seems a little meek buuuut....she's a hell of a witness now. If Deven happens to...y'know, never be seen again I can't see her just forgetting the last time she saw him was a glimpse of shit-caked toes in Arya's rectum.....and I think Arya knows that too. Freedom before friends, and all! How convenient her bowels are currently empty and Laylah thinks there's something in dire need of fishing out of them... >:D
I'm also curious if Devan really is done for. A stomach is a very fatal place, but it's also largely intended to digest mostly masticated, softened and dead foodstuffs. It might be feasible his skin and body's attempt to repair increasingly awful burns might see him clear to her small intestines....or maybe just keep him around and alive for a solid week or more (*cough-while she lets Laylah fester in her ass-cough*)
Lovely work, I cannot wait to see more!
Posted by Jawasattack 2 years ago Report
Finally came out with the finale! I hope you like it! Also this comment of yours was super well thought out and welcoming. Thanks for taking the time to enjoy my work and I hope to continue to deliver as I find time to write.
Also you freakin read my mind with your suggestions for the finale so I tried to deviate from the usual AV story projection that most were expecting ;)
Posted by BillCipher 3 years ago Report
Possibly Laylah goes into the same place Dev had just left? It would be great to see Arya get herself a new toy.
Posted by Tyrant 2 years ago Report
It’s been awhile, I hope you have plans on continuing this story as I often come back to re-read this one, as well as your other two stories. They are just that good!!!
Posted by Jawasattack 2 years ago Report
It has... But know that I saw this and have found new motivation to keep writing. I am proud to hear that even my first few works are "re-read" worthy! Thank you <3