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I was having some mega writers block, so I wrote this in one sitting in an attempt to break it. I think I did a pretty good job, and I'm feeling invigorated and ready to write more. This was an idea I'd had for a while, playing around with the idea of characters writing about a ridiculous idea, and then it actually happening. It helps that Yuru Yuri is a comedy, so it's perfect for that sort of thing.
Please, let me know what you thought in the comments below!
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Posted by tumlive 4 years ago Report
I LOST IT WHEN I SAW YURUYURI GIRLS IN MY INBOX.... i love these girls so much and they get ZERO ATTENTION.. and you did them so well here (well i mean. you did Akari dirty, but like.... i guess that's just... how it goes with her...) BUT SERIOUSLY all of the dialogue is written so amazingly in character i can't even properly express it... i love this SO MUCH THANK YOU.... aaaa
Posted by Draconatedz 4 years ago Report
Always happy to see a fellow fan of the series enjoy my stuff! And maybe I'll do an Akari pred thing one day, but I just love her as prey too much, she's perfect for it.
Posted by tumlive 4 years ago Report
ah haha don't worry!! Akari pred isn't necessary whatsoever, since i thought it was super funny how you tied in her whole "background character main character" gag into a vore scenario... if anything, i'd wanna see an Ayano pred at some point.... BUT i'm not here to try and force your hand, since all the Yuru girls are adorable, and you did such a great job here... i am content...
Posted by TrainerKatrine 4 years ago Report
Very interesting concept, and props for the attention to detail. Concept wise, this is probably my favourite story from you! But I will say that it's kinda.. Confusing, you feel me? Is everything going on a.. Story in a story in a story.. In a story? And what about the end? Is that a story too?
Aarh.. My head hurts just thinking about it x)
Regardless, super well made! :)
Posted by Draconatedz 4 years ago Report
Thanks, the confusion was very intentional. It falls in line with the humor style of the show.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 4 years ago Report
Ah I see, never watched it so I wouldn't know. x3
Posted by Trex4 4 years ago Report
Thanks man
Posted by Trex4 4 years ago Report
I feel bad for Akari Akaza. She is the only person that doesn’t get a chance of eating someone
Posted by MysteryFuto 4 years ago Report
So is this story, which contained a story containing a story containing a story, itself contained within a story? Are we all just words on a screen, being read out by one of the Yuru Yuri girls to another one?
Posted by Draconatedz 4 years ago Report
Something like that. It's best to expect a dumb blonde to eventually show up and eat/get eaten by someone, sooner or later.
Posted by LordOfGee 4 years ago Report
Bro I don't even know the source material but I love this so much :0