It's a new day in Malia's inner world. Even though his maids are technically constructs made by Malia's soul, Richard is willing to treat them as real people, and even name them one by one. Also, Malia and her sisters want to hang out with him inside her hidden world. Meanwhile, the elf maid is worried that the plant-girls in the garden are running out of fertilizer, and there is only one way to satisfy them: vore. Will Richard be able to handle an eat and/or be eaten vorgy with Malia and her sisters, despite knowing that he won't die from it?

A/N: Finally finished with my mini-rewrite. Now to work on chapter 6. After that's done, I'll probably open a crowdfunding page so you can support me.

Changelog (V2): Fixed the main issue that made me want to rewrite the story. I changed Tyria's personality from a compulsive rapist to someone who just gets carried away during sex. Also moved the more detailed descriptions of the maids' appearance from this chapter to ch. 4. Also fixed typos, added a few more scenes, and hopefully improved some of the explanations of the world's mechanics.

(V2.1) Fixed typos, like me stupidly writing in 3rd person in the beginning. Also added a short scene about Virginia singing in the party. Thanks to Sad_Dad (in AO3) for pointing out my errors.

(V3) Nothing major changed here. Just a few extra sentences and a few typos/ grammatical errors fixed

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