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Mai is having trouble losing all this weight she packed on recently, and an unexpected confrontation with a girl who seems to know how she gained it isn't helping.
Last time readers wanted to know how the confrontation between Mai and Ai would turn out. So did I, so I figured I'd write something for it. However, I didn't think I could focus a whole story just on that, so I brought in one of the three remaining main characters.
With Emily and Claire gone, Akari probably didn't even try joining the volleyball club this time around. On the other hand, having seen Mai gulp down Ai, she may have found something else to occupy her mind for the two weeks since the last story...
Anyway, I hope you all enjoy this story. :)
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Posted by Whereaminow27 4 years ago Report
Looks like that video is going to be sent to a few other girls after all. :P
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
That certainly could happen.
Posted by 338856 4 years ago Report
This event spreads to Okinawa and the whole country as a disappearance case
=)
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Akari was mostly famous in Okinawa, but if someone felt like making enough noise about her disappearance things certainly could go national. Enough publicity could convince the police to pursue the case seriously.
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
NGL, somehow was thinking a different route with the ending of the previous story, but what you went with this follow up story is pretty good.
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Every story has multiple directions it can go, but in the end, the deciding factor is whatever direction my imagination decides to run with. The best I can do is try to poke it one way or another and hope whatever it comes up with isn't too bad.
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
Totally get you on that point. Sometimes the head and hands sync together and go a route, later on is when the head comes with different outcomes or "what if...".
Posted by rugli 4 years ago Report
I approve of these kind of blackmails when you blackmail the person that eat your friends to eat you as well :)
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
All parties get what they want and everyone goes home happy. :)