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Life has been a bit weird lately which meant I hadn't gotten as much time to write as usual. Coming into November I didn't really have an idea as to what I was going to write and that also affected by ability to produce this story until I finally came up with the utter awful title which made the rest of it fall right into place. I would say I'm sorry about the horrid pun but I'm not. The predator here is a fair bit more ditzy than I usually write them but I feel that it goes along with the idea of a slime pretty well personally. Also a big sucker for slime names being themed after their color.
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Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
This was super hot all around, and I really loved the time jumps! Glad to see you writing again as well :)
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed, was interested in doing something different so I picked ub and slimes X3 Was a little rocky to start with but eventually got it ironed out. December is going to be busy, got at least two stories planned already with a possible third.
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Sweetness, I'm certainly looking forward to em.
Posted by Lilaka291 4 years ago Report
Titles are probably one of the hardest parts if we're being real haha.
Really nice story though :)
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
I usually come up with the title after the idea for the story and make it somewhat punny or alliterative but this time my brain thought of this truly terrible pun first and made a story around it :p
Posted by jgzman 4 years ago Report
It would be handy to put a blank like, or three asterisk, or something, when you move from "present" to "past," and back again. I do like the mechanism, and the story.
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
Nonlinear story telling or swapping perspectives is something that I do a lot in my stories. I like to give the audience the benefit of the doubt and assume they're able to pick up the clues I put in the first (or last of the preceding) sentence of a paragraph to help contextual the tense at hand while also following a rhythm with the organization of the paragraphs themselves.
Posted by KavusKazian 4 years ago Report
This is really good, as always~
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
You flatter me too much sweetie <3
Posted by KavusKazian 4 years ago Report
Hehe sorry! :P