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Zera confronts the Headhunters, and in their conflict, suffers the ultimate failure.
Sonja stands before The Queen, with regicide of an unworthy monarch on both of their minds. In their debate, a shocking truth is learned.
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Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
Fantastic chapter, Zera finally realize she has someone still alive who is worth fighting for and managed to take out the headhunter group with some help by her daughter. I wonder what will become of them at the end.
And the mystery behind the prophesy is revealed and wow, the evil queen received a couple of nasty surprises before the end. Sonja must have gotten some education before she was driven out of the palace when coming up with such a brilliant idea; immortality my ass! XD
It seems Wesley was fortunate with the soldiers earlier mishap after all when everything came to an end.
The chapter was really good, you kept the focus on the main protagonists the whole time and the battles were good, descriptive yet not too overwhelming. You even managed to add a few points of depths in this, regarding Zera's battle and in the evil queen's mocking.
I am excited to see what happens now afterwards, Sonja seems to be pounding on what it means to be a good and just ruler.
Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you found the chapter so enjoyable ^^
I worried when I wrote that prophecy if I made it a bit too obvious what the twist - if any - would be.
I'm curious, how predictable was this chapter? Were you taken by surprise more often than not?
Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
I was mostly surprised by the fact that for once, the resistance manage to accomplish one important goal XD
But no, I didn't find the chapter predictable, the outcome of Zera's battle for example, and her daughter's appearance was totally unexpected. Equally unexpected was how fast Sonja managed to kill the queen by using her wits instead of muscle power, that was really a clever twist!