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Tags: BBW BBW pred Belly Big Belly Big Breasts Big Butt Bones bones breaking Bones in scat Breast Expansion Breasts Burping Butt Chubby Cruel Pred Digestion Disposal Farting Fat Fatal Female Pred Female Prey implied mass vore Male Prey melty digestion Multiple Preys Same Size Scat unwilling predator Unwilling Prey Weight Gain Willing Predator Willing prey
"In a quiet bar late at night, two strangers share stories about a world neither of them chose to hunger for. One plays at being a detective; the other plays at being an ordinary woman. He's trying to figure out whether those stomach gurgles are aimed at him before she can get close enough to show him." - https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B08PDJY117/ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_bibl_vppi_i5
IT'S DONE! Three guesses when I planned this to release for... happy vore day everyone : ^)
Super proud of how this one turned out, from the content to the cover. Please do give me your honest feedback, because I'd really like to know if all the extra time was worth it.
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Posted by ShamefulInterest 4 years ago Report
While I can't vouch for the story (No way to view it for me :c)
I quite like the picture!
I think my highlights would be first the background/setting. I just love those kinda apartments I had actually planned to set a few of my own stories.
Secondly, I quite love what you did with her face maybe it's not everyone's taste but I found it quite cute especially the way she stuck her tongue out.
I think my only criticisms would be that her nose does look a little off and slightly piggy but it doesn't ruin her face or the picture.
But I'd definitely like to see more of your art and even more of her or characters like her c:
Posted by RavenRoberts 4 years ago Report
Thank you very much <3 I think you might be able to read it free with amazon prime, but I don't know the specifics unfortunately
I had no idea what to do with her nose or hand, it's why I ended up keeping some of the sketch just for definition. The piggy nose kinda grew on me, ngl ^^
Posted by ShamefulInterest 4 years ago Report
Well, you made it work!
Posted by Raesetsu 4 years ago Report
I loved it. I still wish you had a story where they actually form a relationship, but other than that I loved it. I loved the digestion descriptions and I especially love your writing style. I can't wait for the next.
Posted by RavenRoberts 4 years ago Report
Means a lot to me, thank you <3 I've never been very good when it comes to relationships, I'll be honest ^^' I do have a few ideas that roll along those lines though, so we'll see what happens ;)
Posted by Raesetsu 4 years ago Report
All I have to say is to keep doing what you're doing. I love the digestion descriptions, I love the casualness of your preds, and I love the disposal scenes. Keep doing that and I'll keep coming back. It's just so good. I'm glad I found you.
Posted by CalypsoIam 4 years ago Report
Just a heads up for anyone who's dumb like me: if you're on a shared amazon account and use kindle unlimited to read there is no way to remove it from your history of borrowed items after you've read it. So if you don't want anyone to see the smut you're reading, don't use a shared account lol
Posted by CalypsoIam 4 years ago Report
Good story though! It's really well written. I kind of wish there was a disposal scene at the end, but that's personal taste.
Posted by RavenRoberts 4 years ago Report
Oh dear, I hope that doesn't end with any uncomfortable conversations! And thank you for your kind words <3