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I made another story of a lovely RP I had a year ago with my pal throwaway2314:
https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/throwaway2314/
Sorry for taking so long to publish it, but better late than never, I guess…
Thumbnail is made of the artwork with my jackal OC Atoth, drawn for me by my friend youngintellegentfurryfriend:
https://www.furaffinity.net/user/youngintellegentfurryfriend
Original artwork can be found here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/651013
Your faves and comments would be very appreciated! ;)
Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/654188
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Posted by Droyl 4 years ago Report
Wow, such a great story! Love the small belches and farts through the whole text. I also love the amazing oral sex part with the jackal's big belly. I never thought about the idea of cracking bones in bellies but I really like it and the way you wrote it. For me, there are missing some descriptions about the look of the two characters (especially colors) to get a general picture of their look and I think a urine part in the toilet part would fit in very well.
Once again, pretty good story!
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I'm really glad that you liked the story!
Urine and toilet stuff are in the second part of this story!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/654188