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Digestive Punishment Game By Nowaya -- Report

Uploaded: 3 years ago

Views: 18,447

File size: 1.19 MiB

MIME Type: image/png

Resolution: 1600x1500

Comments: 10

Favorites: 357

Omochikaeri~❤

I'm trying to improve my art, so please let me know what you think! I'm open to criticism! ( ╹ڡ╹)

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ShadowSun

Posted by ShadowSun 3 years ago Report

Not nearly enough Higurashi vore out there. Great work.

Nowaya

Posted by Nowaya 3 years ago Report

Thanks! I was thinking the same thing, there's barely any right?

ShadowSun

Posted by ShadowSun 3 years ago Report

Not that I can find really. It needs more.

carlj

Posted by carlj 3 years ago Report

This looks awesome! Keep up the good work ^^

MellowYellow

Posted by MellowYellow 3 years ago Report

Looks great! I especially like the bulges on the belly. But since you asked for a bit of criticism: The face looks a bit off, the hair is at an angle yet the face has it's features as if it was facing the front. The eyes seem a bit to close together as well, and the weight of the belly doesn't affect the pred at all but those may be stylistic choices. Still, it must be stated that the improvement you've made between pieces is staggering, keep up the good work!

Nowaya

Posted by Nowaya 3 years ago Report

Thanks for for the critique and encouragement! I did feel like something was a little off near the end... and you're definitely right that the perspective on the face isn't quite like it should be.
I'll try to improve on it for future uploads.

MellowYellow

Posted by MellowYellow 3 years ago Report

Sorry if I was at all too harsh, but I really mean it when I say this piece is great, I'm excited to see how you improve in the future!

Nowaya

Posted by Nowaya 3 years ago Report

You weren't too harsh at all! I really do appreciate getting constructive feedback like that on where I can improve.

theweirdone445

Posted by theweirdone445 3 years ago Report

Glad my fav girl finally got some art! Nice work!