Looks great! I especially like the bulges on the belly. But since you asked for a bit of criticism: The face looks a bit off, the hair is at an angle yet the face has it's features as if it was facing the front. The eyes seem a bit to close together as well, and the weight of the belly doesn't affect the pred at all but those may be stylistic choices. Still, it must be stated that the improvement you've made between pieces is staggering, keep up the good work!
Thanks for for the critique and encouragement! I did feel like something was a little off near the end... and you're definitely right that the perspective on the face isn't quite like it should be.
I'll try to improve on it for future uploads.
Posted by ShadowSun 4 years ago Report
Not nearly enough Higurashi vore out there. Great work.
Posted by Nowaya 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I was thinking the same thing, there's barely any right?
Posted by ShadowSun 4 years ago Report
Not that I can find really. It needs more.
Posted by carlj 4 years ago Report
This looks awesome! Keep up the good work ^^
Posted by MellowYellow 4 years ago Report
Looks great! I especially like the bulges on the belly. But since you asked for a bit of criticism: The face looks a bit off, the hair is at an angle yet the face has it's features as if it was facing the front. The eyes seem a bit to close together as well, and the weight of the belly doesn't affect the pred at all but those may be stylistic choices. Still, it must be stated that the improvement you've made between pieces is staggering, keep up the good work!
Posted by Nowaya 4 years ago Report
Thanks for for the critique and encouragement! I did feel like something was a little off near the end... and you're definitely right that the perspective on the face isn't quite like it should be.
I'll try to improve on it for future uploads.
Posted by MellowYellow 4 years ago Report
Sorry if I was at all too harsh, but I really mean it when I say this piece is great, I'm excited to see how you improve in the future!
Posted by Nowaya 4 years ago Report
You weren't too harsh at all! I really do appreciate getting constructive feedback like that on where I can improve.
Posted by theweirdone445 4 years ago Report
Glad my fav girl finally got some art! Nice work!
Posted by Karsap 9 months ago Report
I would like to see more.