Posted by no one 4 years ago Report

Well done.

Posted by TheVenusFlytrap 4 years ago Report

Thanks! :)

Posted by Yurzi 4 years ago Report

Cool concept and great read!

Posted by TheVenusFlytrap 4 years ago Report

Thanks! Feel free to steal the concept :)

Posted by NightRoller 4 years ago Report

That was certainly different. My own pieces are maybe not quite as far reaching into intriguing experiment territory by vore-ifying things that aren't typically considered with vore, but experimenting is certainly fun!

Posted by TheVenusFlytrap 4 years ago Report

There are two ways to stand out from the ordinary. Either you are a wonderful artist who writes vore stories in such an expressive and intense way that you can stay "mainline", and everyone follows you.
Or you play with stories, or nuances that aim at shocking the reader, so that you become the dude who did that.
In the end, you decide who you want to be, and what is the purpose of your story. Should vore be the center piece of your story, or, in my case, is it just a pretext?
My best advice would be, don't hesitate to experiment. Yurzi pointed me to a wonderful and poetic story by... yourself haha! Butterflies, a short.
So, well... Now I guess I cannot teach you anything haha...

So, yeah, please go ahead, find your way out by experimenting. Go on. :)

Posted by NightRoller 4 years ago Report

" cannot teach anything"?!
I beg to differ!
The fact that you made such an interesting piece that I felt like commenting on it is sufficient for me to say that I have at least some things to learn from you, even if you're learning from me simultaneously.
And I'm glad you liked it! That story seems to be pretty popular, despite its short length (which is just as it says on the tin).

Posted by NightRoller 4 years ago Report

Commenting removed my brackets!
It was supposed to say "you cannot teach me anything"?!