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Hinata absolutely loves her sister's roommate, but her sister keeps getting in the way. What lengths will Hinata go to to claim her beloved?

Here's something from one of my favorite manga series. It's a pleasant, comfy series about two girls who end up as roommates in college and decide to stay together for the rest of their lives. Despite both of them showing (and even stating) that they love each other a lot, they're also perfectly comfortable never putting a label on their relationship. Still, everyone knows the two of them are ineparable. Which makes things a bit awkward when Sakurako's little sister shows up and is clearly just as enamored with Kasumi as her big sis...

Anyway, this idea came to me today, and I just had to jump on it before it escaped. I hope you all enjoy it! :)

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seidoka

Posted by seidoka 4 years ago Report

Oh wow! Futaribeya is a series I never expected to see content for on this site. I loooove the manga, and kudos for you for continuing to find all these niche stories that are excellent!

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad to see people enjoying my stories. :)

I admit I never expected to see Futaribeya vore either, but the idea hit me and I wanted to get it down before I lost it the way I've lost several other things I've tried to work on lately. I really love the manga as well, and it's good to see there are other fans of it around here. :)

RexLou

Posted by RexLou 4 years ago Report

While I can't say I know the characters, I do very much enjoy the execution of this story. The way Hinata went from the predator to prey so quickly was very interesting, as was Kasumi's handling of the whole situation. Definitely a fun scenario that you turned into a fun fic. I also enjoyed your use of some more robust noises here, I'd be excited to possibly see more of that in the future.

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

I enjoy a good reversal, where a predator soon becomes prey themselves, but I don't often have a good scenario where I can make use of the idea. I'm glad this one worked out.

I'm forced to admit, I'm not actually sure what you mean when you say "robust noises" in terms of this story. Can you give me an example?

RexLou

Posted by RexLou 4 years ago Report

I specifically mean when you wrote out that big burp in the start. Stomach noises like that are always really fun to see.