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Tanja is home alone, but she's bored and hungry, so she invites her friends over to a drinking game. For the shrunken people inside the Vortex box on her table, however, this game will prove to be dead serious...
This is an erotic story that was written for mature adults with a sexual preference for vorarephilia. It contains depictions of physical and psychological cruelty that some people may find disturbing. Minors and people who feel that such depictions upset them are therefore explicitly asked not to read this story. Moreover, this story is entirely fictional and all characters are at least 18 years old.
Tags: Aware, Casual, Crush, Digestion, Disposal, Fatal, FM/fm, Hard Vore, Human, New World Order, Shrinking, Soft Vore, Unwilling, Violent
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Posted by Littledude 4 years ago Report
I remember Tanja from the pool story, nothing to hint that she was like this. I enjoyed the reveal! It's a shift from how you usually portray people in this setting and it's neat to see someone who breaks from the indifferent mold, her and Lisa too.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 4 years ago Report
Interesting that you say that! I actually imagined her to be somewhat like this since story 4, though she wasn't a point-of-view-character before and it might not have come across as much as I intended.
I'm glad you enjoyed the shift in style though, it's always a bit challenging to introduce new ideas without breaking away from the established concepts. In what way did you think Lisa was different, though? :D
Posted by Littledude 4 years ago Report
She toys around with and eating Pascal. Although some of her friends join in the teasing I got the feeling they were just following her lead.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 4 years ago Report
I think you mean Tanja, don't you? :) While Tanja got more characterisation in this story, I was a bit surprised that you wrote "her and Lisa too" in your first comment, so I was wondering what was different about Lisa (not Tanja) in this story! :D
Posted by Littledude 4 years ago Report
I must remember wrong.
Posted by MrDave 4 years ago Report
You don't only focus on the content what's happening, but you focuse also on the development of the different characters: Well done! :)
The scene of Marvin inside Alessias fit belly is marvellous! Being battered and bruised by her abs during sex really helps to show how inconsequential the tinies are as food!
Anyway, would not mind to be in Marvin's place, I mean, instead of Jonas' place, who is now a part of the sadistic Tanja, or?
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 4 years ago Report
Thank you again for your kind words! :) Glad you enjoyed this story too.
I guess it really depends on what you prefer! I think both scenarios have a particular appeal. But I guess you could say that since Alessia really just doesn't think of tinies as people, she isn't actively malicious towards them. Can't say that for Tanja! :D