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A vain housedaughter's witch aunt leaves her a queer mirror in her will.

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Hey, sorry for taking so long, but it's been a rough couple of months, my attention hasn't been great, and every time i near completion I end up deciding the story needs another arc. I've decided to split this down the middle so I can at least have something to show for it. The second part is mostly written, but I don't know when it'll be done.

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Aickavon12

Posted by Aickavon12 4 years ago Report

I... am trying to keep apace with this... but it's very hard to read. There is a lot of concepts being described here, a lot of names and characters... and it's all wrapped up in very flowery language that makes it very hard to follow, and even dull at times.

Slayerhero90

Posted by Slayerhero90 4 years ago Report

no worries. it was a damned pain to write this one, and i'm not exactly happy with it

ultimately, yeah, among my stories in this setting, this one is dependent on a higher familiarity with the lore established in other stories

they're also written kinda flowery, but that's just what feels right for this. it's fine if that puts you off; idk if i'd enjoy what i wrote if it were a stranger's writing. i just know that i like writing it, and some people out there like reading it, so it's cool