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After the events of the maternity store, Naoko realises that she'd taken a pregnancy she shouldn't have, and so goes to see if she can use the Regalia's power to fix what she used it to cause...
If I may be honest, I think that Naoko's taking of Anita's baby at the beginning of "Testing Limits" was poorly written by me; it was needlessly cruel, something that I realised Naoko would not do in a right state of mind. The title of this part of the Regalia story therefore has two contexts; Naoko returning Anita's baby to her, and me making sure that (as you all requested) Anita got a happy ending. I hope it worked out. :)
Criticisms welcome.
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Posted by DresdenQ 4 years ago Report
excellent, glad the Anita plot line was resolved
Posted by CassiSquish 4 years ago Report
I'm glad to hear it. :)
Posted by nowe333 4 years ago Report
Thanks a lot, I can not wait to continue :)
Posted by CassiSquish 4 years ago Report
There will be more! :)
Posted by Groblek 4 years ago Report
Very nice! And I don’t think that having Naoko take Anita’s baby was badly written, it just needed a resolution, and this was a good one. It’s good for her to get an early lesson that drives home the need to think about the consequences of what she does with the Regalia.
Posted by CassiSquish 4 years ago Report
Eh, by the standards I set for myself I think it could have been done at least a little better; though I at least managed to spin it into an opportunity for character growth and expansion, I think.
You've no idea how much I appreciate your words, though. Thank you for every comment you leave!