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While helping her fellow servants as the surrogate mother of Chaldea, Raikou does her best to please Jack The Ripper, but she soon has an even better idea on how she should raise her newest needy child.
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Posted by NRawk 4 years ago Report
Amazing work as usual! This was exactly what I needed today! Mama Raikou and Jack, best daughter, together.
I can't find anything wrong with the story itself, though one this that felt off was the overuse of comas throughout. I'm also pretty bad for using comas too often, though I admit that it is a really minor nitpick.
Thank you for the amazing read. Can't wait for what you got lined up next :D
Posted by Grimmahr 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it and the characters seemed to fit personality wise. It was a interesting dynamic for the pair.
And yeah... Commas and I have a troublesome relationship...
Either way (,) I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^-^