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Neopolitan, the pint sized purloiner and pursuer of a certain red cloaked lady has finally found her quarry. But revenge won't come without a little creativity and boy does she have some ideas for her! Now if only her damned sister wasn't here too...
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So this was essentially an idea that came about from watching recent RWBY episodes (Slight spoilers but Neo doesn't eat anyone in that) and everything else just kinda flowed together naturally! Frankly i'm shocked it took me THIS LONG to write about Neo since she's a favourite of mine! But here it is and i'm pretty damn happy with this one.
Hope you all enjoy, expect more RWBY vore in future!
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Posted by FireRed2 4 years ago Report
Great story
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
Glad ya like it.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 4 years ago Report
Whats this about blake and a spider I hear?
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
Reference to another few stories I did involving Trifa and Blake, you can find them in my gallery!
Posted by ChaosShadowX 4 years ago Report
thumbnail?
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
Very old AOIISA pic.
Posted by Plume7 4 years ago Report
I’d like to see the three of them getting along in the distant future. I love seeing these kinds of scenarios get normalized with time. Like, it’s too the point Yang asks her for stuff to eat, and Neo eats it and sends it to them.
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
I've considered having Trifa and Neo meet up in a future piece, actually. I don't think Neo would ever truly 'get along' with them both... buuuut I could see her becoming more lenient over time.
Posted by Plume7 4 years ago Report
Yeah, and Ruby, too. She eventually gives up and accepts that this is her life now and adapts accordingly.
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
Yeah she'll just be extra pouty about it.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Well to be honest ruby wasn’t the one most at fault for Roman’s death if I’m remembering correctly. He was wiping the floor with her when a bird decided he looked tasty, wonder what will happen when she finds that out
Posted by The K 4 years ago Report
I love this story. The way you described Neo's big belly, the round cheeks when they are full, and those burps. Especially that last grand finale burp with the gas. That was perfect writing there. Good job!
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
Glad you liked it! The full cheeks was some ground i've been wanting to break for a while.
Posted by The K 4 years ago Report
They were great in usage.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
So most of the team have found a new home, all except for Weiss, don’t suppose she’s next?
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
Definitely considering it, not sure who would make a good home for her.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Maybe Cinder? Fire girl gets her own little ice cube to help her deal with the stresses rampant in her life?
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
Not a bad idea thematically, less so in terms of how they're related. Might have to be both Weiss and Winter to make it seem a bit more fitting.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
All the better, might I suggest unbirth though? It would make the capture more of a pursuit of pleasure and a way to disgrace the heiress daughters who are meant to be prim and proper.
Posted by CadenGallic 4 years ago Report
Possibly. I've not written unbirth yet so that'd be breaking new ground, hm...
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Ah that might be a wrinkle for a bit then
Posted by MrMetroid 3 years ago Report
might be jumping in (and shaking off rust in doing so), but there's definitely options.
IMHO at least, easiest ones involve Weiss' rebelliousness against her father - she flees home, then gets gobbled up (either to fulfill a grudge or hoping the Schnee heiress makes for a queen-sized meal-ticket). And because I have an overactive imagination, I could totally see Jacques (being a douche) outright hiring whoever ingested Weiss to be a "bodyguard" (i.e., mobile prison) that "keeps her out of trouble", even giving Weiss' heir-status to Whitley as incentive for her to behave if she wants out (and Weiss likely being stubborn enough to rather sit in someone's stomach than cave to her father, no matter how disgusting she finds it)
As for who owns the stomach that'd own Weiss? Well, assuming the whole "villain tums make good homes" theme stays a thing, Cinder's admittedly high on the list - though in my case it's not 'cause of the thematic nature but more 'cause of her recent reveal as a former Mantle/Atlas slave who hated the aristocracy and, in the V8 finale, even spited Weiss for being a Schnee; her basically stealing the pampered life Weiss didn't want for herself would be a nice irony (although it might be to close to mirroring what happens with Trifa and Blake, even if reversed with Cinder being more callous compared to Trifa eventually warming up to her tummy's occupant).
Alternatively, maybe another option could be Vernal? (in case Cinder getting that much power reminds anyone of V8 and burns them out - cause while I personally liked the volume, I'll admit that *hot damn* did it have a dark tone and bittersweet ending). Gven the bandit's brief rapport/rivalry with her in V5 (even keeping Myrtenaster on her hip like a trophy-weapon and being reluctant to part with it). Weiss runs away, Vernal captures and gulps her down, makes to leverage Weiss' captivity for a ransom in exchange for keeping her safe, has to also learn to deal with a fussy tummy thanks to Weiss' stubbornness, etc. Also be good coverage for a character who's rarely used and got very little screen-time, on a personal note.
Ok, done rambling XD; short version's that there's definitely options to play with in giving Weiss a new home like her teammates.
Posted by CadenGallic 3 years ago Report
You know I actually quite like the idea of someone getting sent out to detain her stomach style by her Dad, that's almost entirely in character.
Vernal and Cinder are good picks... but I might have a third idea involving someone that wouldn't make 100% sense in terms of canon? But they're a pred I've been almost salivating to make use of and this seems a perfect context for it...
Posted by MrMetroid 3 years ago Report
well, that's not gonna drive me mad with curiosity... XD