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The Fox's Wedding By gingerkitsune -- Report

Our protagonist really loves foxes - but how much do they love him back?

This is my first story, so any constructive feedback is welcome. Hope you all like it!

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x9comega

Posted by x9comega 4 years ago Report

I LOVED this. Personally for me, once you mention bones in a Hard Vore story I find it hotter if it’s eventually a whole skeleton, but that’s just me. I adored the mental manipulation aspect, how she just made them think it was all status quo, all totally normal. I’m curious how eating one human man gave her a full set of tails?

gingerkitsune

Posted by gingerkitsune 4 years ago Report

I think I could have expanded on this more in the story, but the idea is that as Hitomi ate more of James, she also consumed more of his soul, until eventually she gained enough mana to have 9 tails.

NonBinaryFuta

Posted by NonBinaryFuta 3 years ago Report

This was a wonderful wholesome story, Those 2 are so cute together and your descriptions are great. Thanks so much for this lesbian wonderfulness.

gingerkitsune

Posted by gingerkitsune 3 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it!

NonBinaryFuta

Posted by NonBinaryFuta 3 years ago Report

<3

alockwood1

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

Interesting.

gingerkitsune

Posted by gingerkitsune 1 year ago Report

Coming from a prolific writer such as a yourself, I'm flattered to even be noticed, so thank you! It does need a lot of work, I'll admit.

alockwood1

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

To be fair, I generally prefer non-fatal stuff. Still, not bad.