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Mai's Final Fight. By Uchihabiscuit -- Report

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Mai wants a new training partner for the upcoming King of Fighters tournament, however things will get very bad for her..

After a while where I had stopped writing due to life, I'm now making the comeback with this, please give some feedback or your general thoughts, I also have written this on my phone so I apologise for any spacing issues or grammar errors.

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DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 3 years ago Report

So since you noted that this was written on your phone and that typos were going to be in it, I really can't say much aside from next time if you're passing up on the fight, you might want to work on a better transition. Had to reread the end of page three and beginning of page four because I thought I missed something.

Uchihabiscuit

Posted by Uchihabiscuit 3 years ago Report

Understood, will definitely keep that in mind.