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Finally I wrote a new story! Let me tell you guys. I really NEEDED this story. Thanks to it I finally unlocked my writing block (even if I wrote it in 9 days ^^'). I invented this as an interactive story. You will be the ones to decide where Erik will end up. So leave a comment with your preference and soon I will write the second part (maybe with the top two or three scenarios) ;D I hope you'll enjoy it. ^^
(I'll wait 3 or 4 days for the final count)
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Posted by Rimedane 3 years ago Report
Honestly, I think my top four would be: Helen, Nickie, Mandy and Dr. Chan.
However if I had to choose only one of them, I would go with Mandy, if only because I love the idea of him knocking up the two other girls in Mandy's womb.
Posted by david100 3 years ago Report
You are not the only one that had that idea xD We will see ;)
Posted by BigBobbyBlobtheSlob 3 years ago Report
Jessica won my attention the most with the two handed belly slap, belly punishment is hot 100% both hands down.
Posted by david100 3 years ago Report
Belly Punishment it's kinda hot when it's not too violent ^^
Posted by Tolun 3 years ago Report
Betty, Helen, Mandy, and Dr.Chen
Toss up between Betty and Mandy, but probably Mandy? This was a really fun read.
Posted by david100 3 years ago Report
Thank you! ^^
Posted by stilluncomfortable 3 years ago Report
I say Helen, love how maturnel she is to him especially with the nursing
Posted by Daun007 3 years ago Report
Helen, Dr. Chan. 10/10
Posted by ringer48 3 years ago Report
I'm stuck between Betty,Zarya, Gwen, Helen, Mandy and Dr Chan
But if I had to choose it would be between Helen and Betty
(Niki would be interesting to see as well though)
Posted by lala7 3 years ago Report
All!
Posted by Harleking31 3 years ago Report
Oof, can't choose between Mandy Helen and Nickie
Posted by Gakgak 3 years ago Report
Jessica
Posted by elliotalien08 3 years ago Report
Id say Jessica or doctor chan those two are best
Posted by Thatvikingguy 3 years ago Report
Good selection of mothers.
Jessica, Zarya, Gwen, Tina, Nickie, Mandy, Dr. Chan.
So hard to choose but I do like a little more the ones with the extended pregnancy plan.
Posted by jeremy9011 3 years ago Report
Daria because they have the same age
But i want all of them^^
Posted by Destroyah23 3 years ago Report
Mandy or Helen for me
Posted by zy4613 3 years ago Report
Dr. Chan.，Zarya
Posted by CLIPSE22 3 years ago Report
gwen, Nickie, helen, betty y Dr. Chan
my choice falls on mandy i love the idea that he is inside a uterus with 2 beautiful girls with the probability of getting them pregnant and possibly having a family inside mandy and making her bigger and never leaving her uterus
Posted by CLIPSE22 3 years ago Report
but a suggestion since you created all these beautiful options, I recommend you write all their stories, to enjoy those stories too, personally I think they would all be great to read
Posted by Tolun 3 years ago Report
Seconded. It would be nice to see followups to each one and see how far you end up going with each!
Posted by david100 3 years ago Report
I'm not really sure about it. Maybe I could write just a little scene of Erik inside the girls that didn't arrive in the top 3. I'll think about it.
Posted by david100 3 years ago Report
Final count of votes (FA+Ekas): Helen 12, Dr. Chan 9, Mandy 8, Jessica 6, Nickie 5, Gwen 4, Zarya and Betty 3, Tiana and Daria 1
Posted by Tolun 3 years ago Report
Helen really is the best choice story-wise. Looking forward to what you make next!
Posted by Nightcrawler99 3 years ago Report
OK so... Multiple endings and routs i would like to see.
Betty, the kind baker, would be good. Especially since she's never experienced unbirth.(Unknown potential here)
Tiana, "selfish Dominatrix in the making" Unbirth to gain weight? NA... This is a trap!
Helen, the mother looking for a more purpose in life, seams good to. (unknown potential here too)^^
Nickie, the lady with dept. (Easy to see where this could head) Getting forced entrapment vibes.^^
Gwen, the cult woman. Strong abduction vibes here.
Mandy, the already pregnant with twins woman, seams like a grand venture as well. Would be more grand and interesting if it turns out the ones inside are actually trying to escape!^^