Firstly: Thumbnail by the amazing RB23: https://aryion.com/g4/user/RB23

Secondly: Google Drive link for better formatting https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JI4CtmVX9OfRKNC4_Pg6441hQTuxFY-t4_NxseYX__s/edit?usp=sharing

In this chapter Ana has Minx show her how a human body enjoys itself, but it's not quite enough for the demon princess.

This and the following chapter should hopefully make it up to anyone who felt short-changed that the intimate scene got time-skipped over in "Brimstone and Ash". This is by far the longest sex scene I've ever written!

NOTE:
I've always written Minx as ambiguously gendered. The idea being that the reader is free to picture Minx how they would like them to be (male, female, nonbinary etc.) and potentially insert themselves into the role.

While Minx undergoes a temporary shift towards a more feminine appearance in this chapter, this is not intended to tie into trans issues. (This is not meant as a form of erasure, but to treat that kind of stuff respectfully and not feed into fetishisation troubles that a lot of trans people already face.) Neither is it really meant to be "feminisation/sissification" kind of content. My intention is more to underline that Minx doesn't really have a connection with who they used to be, and how their androgynous appearance is likely a result of Ana's meddling. (I also imagine that their presentation in terms of masculine/feminine might change more often than Minx realises depending on Ana's whims.)



Anyway, this chapter more than others I would REALLY appreciate reader feedback on. I am worried about alienating my reader base with this foray into new territory.

I would also really like to know if people actually enjoy how frequently I go into Minx's thoughts caused by Ana's domination, or if they break up the action too much.

(Also I have no idea how to tag half this stuff!)

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