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Another experimental one! Shorter than usual because I’m trying to get some of the ideas I’ve had floating around at least out on paper and produced as opposed to lingering over them.
I found it odd that despite how many times magic gets involved, a shocking lack of voodoo doll related ones. It might confuse the tagging so if you’ve come here by accident, Hi!
Feedback positive or negative is greatly appreciated! And feel free to just PM me if you don’t want to put it as a comment.
After this I’m probably going to either be putting out a loose sequel to the crush. In which Zahra has a very pleasant day that starts in the big city but ends up in the countryside. Well it’s pleasant for her at least.
Or a continuation of my Barriss story. In which Barriss, expands her horizons a little bit. .
Which would you prefer to see first? Let me know in the comments below or drop me a PM.

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KimMadcox

Posted by KimMadcox 4 months ago Report

Now THAT'S some gereat Idea XD

Trying124

Posted by Trying124 4 months ago Report

Well thank you. Hadn’t seen anything like it before so decided to give it a go. I’m very glad you enjoyed it!

shlurpay64

Posted by shlurpay64 4 months ago Report

I would have liked even more digestive details and bodily function stuff because I'm gross but the story is super memorable and creative, I feel like this should be getting more attention than it is.

Trying124

Posted by Trying124 4 months ago Report


Funny you should say that, my usual tendencies are to be more descriptive and include more bodily functions, but that tends to up the word count, was trying to experiment with more concise writing.
Not sure if it worked too well, but hey that’s what experiments are for.
Glad you enjoyed it.
thank you for commenting.