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Peach Ripens (from Zelda) By ZeldaNoVorsu -- Report

It's the First Day of Summer! Like I said on the story for the first day of Spring, this story focuses in on Peach, as summertime is the time of the fruit, not the flower (which she ironically eats in this story), and peach season also falls during the summertime. Fruit ripens during the summer, so naturally I figured this story could revolve around a gluttonous Peach eating a princess or three and then "ripening" her curves as a result. I wasn't quite sure what I wanted to do though, so I asked  derpsquid42 to help me flesh out my idea a bit (since he loves Peach), and we wound up with this: a hybridization of an idea I had around Peach ripening in Smash and Zelda enjoying the results with two different endings, and a story based around the excellent piece, Peach Wins, by Ergos. This is the version all about Peach, with a very willing Skyward Sword Zelda at the end offering herself as one final ripening for Peach. The other version (soon to come), will be where Zelda enjoys a nice, juicy Peach.

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derpsquid42

Posted by derpsquid42 3 years ago Report

Good, good. This came out great! We can always have more Peach pred stories, and more of best Zelda.

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ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 3 years ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed it. There will always be more Peach pred stories, and with Skyward Sword HD right around the corner, expect more of that Zelda (maybe, just maybe, I'll finally even get back to her canon series too).

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The K

Posted by The K 3 years ago Report

More good stuff! Peach letting out those gassy farts telling Daisy her attitude reeks after digestion, really great wording. And of course the cheek bloating meaty belch. I also really like how Peach's large belly became soft and sloshy during her time with Zelda.

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ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 3 years ago Report

All the gassy goodness you've come to expect. Those other princesses certainly gave Peach some smelly farts, and her blaming them on something like Daisy's attitude is always a treat. I really liked the image of the big, soft, sloshy belly for Zelda to cuddle with, so I'm glad you enjoyed it too.

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